Guest guest Posted June 13, 2001 Report Share Posted June 13, 2001 A small child's fingers, for the first time touch the ground. The earth being blessed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 13, 2001 Report Share Posted June 13, 2001 The still of night moves through the pores of dreaming flesh. Life is awakened. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 13, 2001 Report Share Posted June 13, 2001 In motion with life flow the ripples of a pond. The calm undisturbed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 13, 2001 Report Share Posted June 13, 2001 The heart of poets release the flow of darkness. Pain spills into words. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 13, 2001 Report Share Posted June 13, 2001 The streaming flowers blow by my sunlit face Arriving too late for spring. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 13, 2001 Report Share Posted June 13, 2001 Daniel Berkow [berkowd] Wednesday, June 13, 2001 8:48 AM Re: Authentic Haiku contest The streaming flowers blow by my sunlit face Arriving too late for spring. Thanks Dan. Very nice. This Haiku stuff is great! Love Harsha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 13, 2001 Report Share Posted June 13, 2001 , goldy757@a... wrote: > A small child's fingers, > for the first time touch the ground. > The earth being blessed. This is so beautiful it made me cry. Love, Mazie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 13, 2001 Report Share Posted June 13, 2001 Excellent. A small child's fingers, for the first time touch the ground. The earth being blessed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 13, 2001 Report Share Posted June 13, 2001 Porous! The still of night moves through the pores of dreaming flesh. Life is awakened. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 13, 2001 Report Share Posted June 13, 2001 The streaming flowers blow by my sunlit face Arriving too late for spring. Thanks Dan. Very nice. This Haiku stuff is great! Love Harsha Yup, lots of fun, Harsha. You sure started a trend here. It was waiting to explode -- you provided the match! Now, you're matchless (and peerless -- as always!) Love Dan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 13, 2001 Report Share Posted June 13, 2001 The cry of the beast Moving the soft forest leaves; An abandoned howl! -- D. goldy: The heart of poets release the flow of darkness. Pain spills into words. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 13, 2001 Report Share Posted June 13, 2001 Transcending Its life through magnetic direction, Earth becomes Heaven. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 14, 2001 Report Share Posted June 14, 2001 Knife stabbing children consciousness in horror mourning fix needed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 14, 2001 Report Share Posted June 14, 2001 Some words to share... >From my understanding of Haiku... traditional Japanese Haiku is a verse, made up of three unrhymed lines of poetry with 17 syllables...five in the first line...7 in the second line...and 5 in the third line...and it relates to nature.........But American Haiku...does not restrict the writer to these numbers or this theme...My hand seems to be most comfortable with the traditional Japanese verse containing the 5 7 and 5 syllable variation and has been for awhile now......but techniques can be tricky when it comes to writing......just as it is in music and playing an instrument...Too much concentration on technique can cause the heart to lose the flow of the words or the music.......I love Haiku very much and am grateful for this chance here on the list.. to express it as well as read it from otehrs.............. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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