Guest guest Posted April 21, 2002 Report Share Posted April 21, 2002 Emotion is a dip in a lake of lust. Liquid passion drowning concrete I sinks toward endless bottom deep. I can breathe underwater. Had forgotten for so long how since that mother-rich tube from cosmos summoned me years ago. I love her like a natural field fertilized by spent lovers. Circle cycle cycles deep in soil stardust rivering back to ocean, sky before coming back to me (concrete) Earthen soul spirit bred by animals fueled by surreal fire, sky and wonder. I love me and my sharp fangs that devour myself in all it's forms to be spread about like sacred stardust fertilizer to support me more… I am not a bastard to be rejected. I am the very essence of this universe and all Her derivatives. I cannot die. I have tried, (but I cannot die…) In every foolish, evolutional attempt to survive or put me out I come back like trick birthday candles… (make a wish) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 21, 2002 Report Share Posted April 21, 2002 Gee whiz, again with the David! David! DAVID! Wow i so love the way you write and what you have to say! Gee whiz David, it's over the top and sliding back down again. Really great stuff, great! Great stuff here. Oh yeah... Love, Mazie > >Emotion is a dip >in a lake of lust. > >Liquid passion drowning concrete I >sinks toward endless bottom deep. > >I can breathe underwater. >Had forgotten for so long how >since that mother-rich tube >from cosmos summoned me >years ago. > >I love her like a natural field >fertilized >by spent lovers. > >Circle cycle >cycles deep in soil stardust >rivering back to ocean, >sky >before coming back to me >(concrete) > >Earthen soul spirit >bred by animals >fueled by surreal fire, >sky and wonder. > >I love me and my sharp fangs >that devour myself in all it's forms >to be spread about like sacred stardust fertilizer >to support me more… > >I am not a bastard to be rejected. > >I am the very essence of this universe >and all Her derivatives. > >I cannot die. >I have tried, >(but I cannot die…) > >In every foolish, evolutional attempt >to survive >or put me out > >I come back like trick >birthday candles… > >(make a wish) > _______________ Chat with friends online, try MSN Messenger: http://messenger.msn.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 22, 2002 Report Share Posted April 22, 2002 Mazie, Your appreciation is felt and appreciated. The best I can do is send it back ten-fold. That's a pretty good deal. Love Back, David , "Mazie Lane" <sraddha54@h...> wrote: > Gee whiz, again with the David! David! DAVID! Wow i so love the way you > write and what you have to say! Gee whiz David, it's over the top and > sliding back down again. Really great stuff, great! Great stuff here. Oh > yeah... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 22, 2002 Report Share Posted April 22, 2002 Hey, I can swing with the thing, but just this one iota has me a bit puzzled with the quota... Emotion is a dip in a lake of lust. Liquid passion drowning concrete I sinks toward endless bottom deep. I Sinks? :-) Could we just lose the "s" in sinks and call it a day? Hugs... Namaste... Zenbob Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 22, 2002 Report Share Posted April 22, 2002 david bozzi [david.bozzi] Sunday, April 21, 2002 11:18 PM Re: Trick Birthday Candles Mazie, Your appreciation is felt and appreciated. The best I can do is send it back ten-fold. That's a pretty good deal. Love Back, David , "Mazie Lane" <sraddha54@h...> wrote: > Gee whiz, again with the David! David! DAVID! Wow i so love the way you > write and what you have to say! Gee whiz David, it's over the top and > sliding back down again. Really great stuff, great! Great stuff here. Oh > yeah... /join All paths go somewhere. No path goes nowhere. Paths, places, sights, perceptions, and indeed all experiences arise from and exist in and subside back into the Space of Awareness. Like waves rising are not different than the ocean, all things arising from Awareness are of the nature of Awareness. Awareness does not come and go but is always Present. It is Home. Home is where the Heart Is. Jnanis know the Heart to be the Finality of Eternal Being. A true devotee relishes in the Truth of Self-Knowledge, spontaneously arising from within into It Self. Welcome all to a. Your use of is subject to Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 22, 2002 Report Share Posted April 22, 2002 Hi ZenBobji: "I sinks" sounds more descriptive than the "I" sinks or "I sink" Love Bobby G. You sink so? :-) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 22, 2002 Report Share Posted April 22, 2002 Hi ZenBobji: "I sinks" sounds more descriptive than the "I" sinks or "I sink" Love Bobby G. , zen2wrk@a... wrote: > Hi David: > > Hey, I can swing with the thing, but just this one iota has me a bit puzzled > with the quota... > > > > > Emotion is a dip > > in a lake of lust. > > > > Liquid passion drowning concrete I > > sinks toward endless bottom deep. > > > > I Sinks? > > :-) > > Could we just lose the "s" in sinks and call it a day? > > Hugs... > > Namaste... > > Zenbob Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 22, 2002 Report Share Posted April 22, 2002 You guys are funny. I was using 'I' as an object. (like concrete [cinder block] sinks). I'm not looking for editors right now but when I do I'll keep you both in mind. Love, David , "texasbg2000" <Bigbobgraham@a...> wrote: > Hi ZenBobji: > > "I sinks" sounds more descriptive than the "I" sinks or "I sink" > > Love > Bobby G. > > > , zen2wrk@a... wrote: > > Hi David: > > > > Hey, I can swing with the thing, but just this one iota has me a > bit puzzled > > with the quota... > > > > > > > > > Emotion is a dip > > > in a lake of lust. > > > > > > Liquid passion drowning concrete I > > > sinks toward endless bottom deep. > > > > > > > I Sinks? > > > > :-) > > > > Could we just lose the "s" in sinks and call it a day? > > > > Hugs... > > > > Namaste... > > > > Zenbob Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 22, 2002 Report Share Posted April 22, 2002 Ah so, and a double entendre with the meaning of concrete, as block & vs. abstract. The "I" was often made into an object rather than subject, by Ramana and others. Keep me in mind, too... Out of work editor, will defend grammar usage for food!! Gloria You guys are funny.I was using 'I' as an object.(like concrete [cinder block] sinks).I'm not looking for editors right nowbut when I do I'll keep you both in mind.Love,David, "texasbg2000" <Bigbobgraham@a...> wrote:> Hi ZenBobji:> > "I sinks" sounds more descriptive than the "I" sinks or "I sink"> > Love > Bobby G.> > > , zen2wrk@a... wrote:> > Hi David:> > > > Hey, I can swing with the thing, but just this one iota has me a > bit puzzled > > with the quota...> > > > > > > > > Emotion is a dip> > > in a lake of lust.> > > > > > Liquid passion drowning concrete I> > > sinks toward endless bottom deep.> > > > > > > I Sinks?> > > > :-)> > > > Could we just lose the "s" in sinks and call it a day?> > > > Hugs...> > > > Namaste...> > > > Zenbob/join All paths go somewhere. No path goes nowhere. Paths, places, sights, perceptions, and indeed all experiences arise from and exist in and subside back into the Space of Awareness. Like waves rising are not different than the ocean, all things arising from Awareness are of the nature of Awareness. Awareness does not come and go but is always Present. It is Home. Home is where the Heart Is. Jnanis know the Heart to be the Finality of Eternal Being. A true devotee relishes in the Truth of Self-Knowledge, spontaneously arising from within into It Self. Welcome all to a.Your use of is subject to the Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 22, 2002 Report Share Posted April 22, 2002 By gosh, you're right...the ayes (I's) have it! In fact, you clearly had placed the I after concrete on the line preceding "sinks." Now the "concrete I" as a phrased object clearly jumps out and makes sense... I cannot imagine why that zipped by me and why my brain insisted on parsing it to the next line, where "I sinks" was made to occur...and of course...that's neither correct nor what you intended. Never mind... :-) Thanks for that bit of illumination...I was wandering in darkness for a some reason. Namaste, Hugs, Zenbob Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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