Guest guest Posted April 8, 2003 Report Share Posted April 8, 2003 Forgot what I was going to say doesn't matter, so much gets lost in the fog of speak the world of separateness is enshrined in an Ideology of mistrust Don't believe me? Does God notice an unreal world? Am I my dreams? Am I my essential belief that schisms like snakes on Medusa's head? Am I my fear fearing to be stone looking away with scissors partitioning cut-outs of comic-book heroes and insane foes. Character assassins and their missions projected on back-drops, pleasure-splashed with color textures good enough to drink... ‘Good Versus Evil’. Yes I've heard that one before. And again like a bad-habit you can't shake it the honey from your fingertips, the butter from your tongue it doesn't come off like water does. So here I am stuck in this redundant plot that thins and thickens ascends and descends and sometimes crashes outright like planes it's surreal you can see it going all the way back through history It's a cycle. It's vicious... Must be the vicious circle. stuck on it's track round and round stuck on it’s track... Don’t take my word for it have a look for yourself and yourself,(and yourself...) flashes of yourself drop like raindrops on yourself, yourself, yourself... showering by the Our on Ourself, Ourself, Ourself... don’t engage the logic-brakes too hard or you might fall asleep... All aboard! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 10, 2003 Report Share Posted April 10, 2003 , David Bozzi <david.bozzi@i...> wrote: > Forgot > what I was going to say > doesn't matter, > so much gets lost > in the fog of speak > > the world of separateness > is enshrined in an > Ideology of mistrust > > Don't believe me? > > Does God notice an unreal world? > > Am I my dreams? > > Am I my essential belief > that > schisms like snakes > on Medusa's head? > > Am I my fear > fearing to be stone > looking away > with scissors partitioning > cut-outs of comic-book heroes > and insane foes. > > Character assassins > and their missions > projected on back-drops, > pleasure-splashed with > color textures > good enough to drink... > > `Good Versus Evil'. > > Yes I've heard that one before. > > And again > > like a bad-habit > > you can't shake it > > the honey from your > fingertips, > the butter from your > tongue > it doesn't come off > like water does. > > So here I am stuck > in this redundant plot > that thins and thickens > ascends and > descends > and sometimes crashes outright > like planes > > it's surreal > you can see it > going all the way back through history > > It's a cycle. > It's vicious... > > Must be the vicious circle. > > stuck on it's track > round and round > stuck on it's track... > > Don't take my word for it > have a look for yourself > and yourself,(and yourself...) > > flashes of yourself > drop like raindrops > > on > yourself, yourself, yourself... > > showering > by > the > Our > > on > > Ourself, > > Ourself, > > > Ourself... > > > don't engage the logic-brakes > too hard or > you might fall asleep... > > All aboard! Hi David - "flashes of yourself drop like raindrops..." "showering by the Our..." i really like your poem and these images. love and peace to all, joyce (heading into a hair-pin turn with logic-brake-failure) PS - Technical question: the creative spacing in your poem doesn't appear when i view it on the web. This happens to my own at times as well. What causes that? Can it be prevented? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 11, 2003 Report Share Posted April 11, 2003 , "know_mystery" <know_mystery> wrote: > the creative spacing in your poem doesn't > appear when i view it on the web. This happens to my own at times as > well. What causes that? Can it be prevented? Hi Joyce. Yeah, i've noticed that too. For some reason (perhaps to save storage space?) web mail deletes indents on messages. -Peace- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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