Guest guest Posted July 29, 2001 Report Share Posted July 29, 2001 # kanulakuneduruga... -------------------- tribhamgi (83 ) kanulaku neduruga kanabaDuduvu, ayi nanu palukaaDaga boevaemiTe daevee ? maaTale laevaa? anayamu palikeDi vanitavu ayinanu ninugani aediyo maaTaaDucu, aaTaaDaalani aeToe manasidi goNugucu..kshaNamayinanu nilu vananucu poeraga nannee gadinunnaa ,aagadinunnaa, vinivini visuguna manavini salupudu nani, darijaeritinammaa ! nijamammaa! nammavekommaa ! Saa. neepaadammula jaerinaanuyanucun ,neepaapagaa nemcuka nneepadyammula roopuloe nosagudeevennenno aaSeessulan neepaijoopeDi koddibhaktike yilaa nee gumDe neerainacoe neepai nilpagagalginan manasu naenityambu ...naemouduvoe ! koeraenamcunu ninnujaeri epuDoo kromgottavau koerkulan dooranboekumtalli koerukonuToe doeshammugaa nemcucun vaeraedaarini kaanalaeka ,jaDatan vRttambulan saakutoe poeraeneevidhi tallipalkuvinagaa ,moemoeTamun jemdakan ma. alavimgaanidi koerke pomgunedaloenaaSimci neesannidhin ilapai nunnadi koddipaaTigaDuvae ..aereeti meppimcedan teliyanjaalanu ninnujaeruTeTuloe divyambuyou j~naanamun kaladaa vaeroka maargamomDu vaDigaa kaadambarin jaeragaa ? Saa. neevae dikkani nammukonna sutanai nee dhyaanamae salpucun praaveeNyambadi laekapoeyinanu naevraasaeTivee piccivae aevoe naalugu padyamaalaliDucun yee komcemou bhaktinae saevimcaeniTa telsinaTTividhamun cimtimcakimkaemiyun neevae daarini joopavattuvanucunneeDaerca naakoerikan suprabha # 7-29-2001 #(udayamu-daevi mumdu-praarthana samayamuloe)# # kanulu moosikoni yaevoe praarthanaa Sloekaalanu caduvutunna samayamuloe oka kshaNamu manasu vaSamutappi, yeemadhya tribhamgi vraasi caalaaroejulayimdani anukoevaDam jarigimdi. vemTanae aaSuvaegamtoe modaTi paadamu edurugugaanunna tallitoenae maaTlaaDutunnaTlu veluvaDimdi. praarthana naapi amdina palukulatoe padyaalu koorcaTam modalupeTTaanu. # ------ Approximate translation Appearing in the front ----------------------- 1. tribhamgi ( Meter ) you appear infront of my eyes , yet why don't you speak to me daevee ? Don't you have words ? Even though you are the lady who speaks to me constantly,as my heart keeps pestering me whether I am in this room or that room , to see you, speak to you and play with you ,saying it can't stand even for a second more, having listened to its rantings, becoming impatient ,I came near you. This is the truth. Believe me mother ! 2. SaardoolavikreeDitam Just because I came to your feet, thinking of me as your daughter,in the form of these poems you give me many many blessings . With little bit of devotion I show to you if your heart melts like this, I wonder what happens to you if I can concentrate my mind constantly on you ! 3. Thinking ..I keep asking you constantly for new things, considering it as a fault don't reproach me . As I can't find any other way, because of my ignorance, with the pretext of these meters, I pester/fight with you , to listen to your words , with out any hesitation. 4. mattaebhavikreeDitam An uncontrollable desire rises in my heart, to reach your presence. All I have is very little time..How do I acheive it ? I don't know how to reach you through knowledge ( because of lack of it) Is there any other way I can reach you faster ? 5. SaardoolavikreeDitam As a daughter who seeks your shelter, and meditates on you, even though I don't have any skills of writing, giving you these few crazy poems I write , with what ever little devotion I have , I keep worshiping you the way I know, with out bothering about any thing else, hoping you will show me your self the way to get my desire fulfilled... These are a few poems that came through my pen this morning while I was in front of daevi. As I closed my eyes and was reciting some of the sloekaas, for a minute mind veered away and I thought that I haven't written any poems in tribhamgi meter , recently. Immediately a line came in that meter as if I am asking daevi sitting infront of me..prayer stopped in the middle and I continued to write with what ever words I got. Though she keeps showering her love with poems like this very frequently since I haven't shared any recently ,I decided to post a few today. **tribhamgi .. an extremely rare as well as tough telugu meter . I believe no more than 30 poems have been written using that meter,in the past 3-5 centuries as far as I know. But,in the past two and half years alone with Her grace this grassflower has been able to write more than 80 poems in that meter with considerable ease most of the time ,in day to day language as usual..and with my participation in couple of literary events, now many people in this country have become very familiar with it. I don't know why she chose this ordinary person to make that meter well known but I am forever thankful to HER for making me instrumental in that process... with regards to you all, suprabha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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