Ref : A ( request for ) Prayer

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, MSR <miinalochanii> wrote:

> Following is the English translation of the Tamil

prayer given at the

> end of the text. I need your HELP to make into a

poetry. It should be

> very BRIEF. It should be in one or all of the

following languages:

> Telugu, Kannada, Hindi, Sanskrit, and English (which

I can understand

> here and there). Any help to make the Tamil text

given below more brief

> and more poetic will be GRATEFULLY appreciated.

>

>

> English Translation:

>

> O Mother, If I were to be born here again, bless me

that I will worship

> you always. Let me not run behind mortal men seeking

favors and serving

> them for livelihood. Instead, let me live by serving

you. Let that

> alone be the source of my sustenance. Let me not run

across continents

> to learn mundane things which serve only to seek

ephemeral weath.

> Instead let me learns veda-s and other texts which

teach me to worship

> you. When there is such a sweet path to live, bless

my mind to remain

> focussed on you without getting distracted by

useless things.

>

 

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Here is an attempt by a humble grassflower to

translate it into not so poetic ,not so brief :-) song

like telugu version ...

I saw the post only this evening and asked her for

help. What ever I got , I am presenting... /\/\/\

 

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# aaSeessulimmaa !

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marujanma yanunadi naakokaTi uMTae

anukshaNamu ninnae arciMcunaTula

aaSeessulimmaa !... aMbaa ! ....madaMbaa !

 

yee kukshi koraku, yee bratuku koraku

aevaevo koeri..

narulevariveMToe ..parugettaneeku

parugettaneeku...

 

nee poojanammae neebhaavanammae

naa balimi kaaga naakalimikaaga

nee saevaloenae nanu gaDupanimmaa !

nanugaDupanimmaa ! aniSammu ambaa !!

 

kshaNikammulainavi sirulaevo koeri

naervaMganaedoe ihaloeka vidya

parugettaneeka khaMDaaMtaraalu

 

ninugolucu vidhamula naerpaeTi vaedaal

paThiyiMcunaTluga varameeyavammaa !

 

teeyanni pathamadi telisinadi uMTae

mati cedaraneeka nitarammu paiki

manasepuDu ninnae dhyaaniMcunaTula

aaSeessulimmaa ! aMbaa ! madaMbaa !

 

 

suprabha #

11-16-2001

7:30 PM

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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