Guest guest Posted October 3, 2001 Report Share Posted October 3, 2001 SrI: Dearest Srivaishnavas, This is one of the four stories sent to me by Smt Sandhya (our list member). Her writing filled with beautiful narration with full of anubhavam touched everyone's heart at home. I would like to share my enjoyment with you all. All four stories are simply excellent. With her permission, I am sending the first one as a sample. I will place them in the files section later this week and announce it for your reading and enjoyment. Regards Namo Narayana aDiyEn dAsam ================== When the palace stopped! Swarnamukhi lifted her head to look out of the palace window - is it time yet, she wonders. The pale crimson of the morning skies tells her that it is nearing the time. She places the earring back on the plate, her task of arranging the Queen's jewelry for that day, incomplete yet. "Thank God, at least I finished those flowers first today. But Queen Kaikeyi never minds at all, that I always leave her task incomplete, she is so good to me!" she thinks, as she hurried towards Queen Kausalya's part of the palace where Padmini was busily tying small garlands in preparation for the Queen's puja (prayer) that morning. "Come on, quick hurry up- its almost time" urges Swarnamukhi. Padmini looks up, leaves those garlands behind with a happy yet anxious smile saying "There, maybe those two garlands will suffice for the Queen this morning - you know she is so good, never once says anything about these incomplete garlands!" They hurry together towards their destination. Gunaseela was busily polishing the King's footwear for that day. He had already set out the King's royal dresses for the day. "All I have left to do is to set out His Highness's sword, and the crown and I can rush off" he thought, still polishing vigorously. He hears Swarnamukhi, Padmini and the others hurriedly scurrying by and realizes he could be late too if he did not start right away! "Hopefully, King Dasaratha will excuse me today too. >From tomorrow, I will finish the sword first!" he thought determinedly as he sped towards the palace's paakasala(kitchen) to get Vishnuchittha. Sivadatta as usual, was completely immersed in his recipe preparation - there was the fruits to be peeled and cut up, the ghee (clarified butter) to be melted, rice to be cooked Oh! so much to be completed yet, before His Highness, the Queens and the Princes were ready to eat his preparation. As he oversees his assistant slowly peeling the mangoes, Gunaseela hurries along. "Vishnuchittha! late as usual ha! lets go soon, we can always come back and finish, come on.." he urges hurriedly. Vishnuchittha takes one look at the milk just beginning to heat up, removes some of the wood from the fire, to slow it down and rushes off with Gunaseela, his assistant quickly following him too! All along the flowered path, there were scores of all the other royal servants, hurrying along in the same direction, to catch a glimpse, get one more vision of the most beautiful sight they have ever seen. The parrots on the tree outside the window were the earliest to wake up (or was it the flowers?). They chirp around actively waking up all the other creatures of nature too, urging them that it is time! The deer wander in slowly towards the window. The lizards open their lazy eyes. The cows and the royal horses wistfully stand by their barns, hoping they could go too. Alas, they could not go, today too! The bees hum happily as they buzz above the flowers outside the window. The flowers outside the window, knew they were the first ones to wake up actually (those proud parrots can think whatever they want!) - the yellow roses, white daisies, and the red roses standing proudly behind the yellow roses - all of them eagerly waiting. As the nature and the royal servants gather around the windows with pleasant anticipation, their little Prince Raama sleeps inside seemingly oblivious to all the commotion outside. He lay with His feet exposed from the silk blanket, with traces of dried mud from the river bank yesterday evening (Mayura, the Princes' chariot driver told them to put on their footwear, but would they heed when the water was so cool? Now Mayura remembers this as he beholds those tiny delicate red Feet). The green silk blanket, seems to be competing with the glowing yellow of His peethambaram (yellow dress). Those Hands that lay wrapped around the pillow, still had those red marks near the thumbs from yesterday's archery practice. A couple of jasmine flowers (from Queen Kaikeyi's hair) lay next to the pillow, still gently singing the lullaby that Queen Kaikeyi sang last night to the Prince. Black hair curled in soft curls as the cool morning breeze blew yet so gently around them. The cheeks had the pale red hew ("just like a girl" thought Saudamini, the royal court decorator, with a smile) - from a deep sleep, and there slept the young Prince with eyes locked in by long curling eyelashes, a light smile on those lips as if remembering yesterday's fun at the riverside - so small is such a big bed, yet so much the focus of all attention. They were so absorbed in beholding the very beautiful scene of the little Prince Raama sleeping, they hardly noticed the sun creep up slowly behind them. As the sun's gentle rays fell on the Prince's face, the Lord opened His lotus like eyes slowly, looked at the roses outside the window and smiled as if in competition with them! He lay there in bed, gently smiling at the deer, the parrots, the flowers, the lizards and the bees - as the entire palace royal servants seemed lost in the scene - the beauty of the Lord's awakening. Time seemed to stand still, they all seemed to have forgotten their very existence, enthralled at the sight of the Lord's semi open, sleep laden eyes! As they beheld the Lord's sweet soft lazy smile, lotus like eyes - they knew nothing else was ever needed for them for the rest of their existence! While all this was happening, elsewhere in the palace at the same time: Queen Kaikeyi stepped in front of her mirror to wear her jewelry, and called " Swarnamukhi! can you help me with these clasps?" Swarnamukhi comes in quickly to the Queen's summons. The Queen says "Really Swarnamukhi, you are so talented at selecting just the jewelry I wanted to wear today!" Queen Kausalya pauses before starting her puja to Lord Vishnu. As she glances at all the garlands and the preparations for her puja, she thinks "I must give Padmini that ruby necklace as a gift, she does such good work, just the way I like it." Gunaseela helps King Dasaratha balance the crown deftly on his head, bows and stands back to allow the King to head towards Queen Kausalya's room. Vishnuchittha serves an extra helping of his special preparation to little Prince Sathrughna, thinking "these little Princes need so much nourishment as they are growing up so fast - especially Prince Raama there, I hope He liked my dish today". ======================================================= I don't think all this really happened at all, but Lord Raama is simply so beautiful, that even imagination like this seems to become real and life like for the person imagining Him. Hope you enjoy reading it! - C Sandhya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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