too long title

[Guest guest]

You already have "activities in the Part 1 title. And the reader well knows

who the book is about by now. Why not simply, "His Message, Mission, and

Personality," or "More on His Message, Mission, and Personality."

 

Hare Krsna

 

ys, kbdg

 

> Part 2: Further Consideration of the Message, Mission, Personality, and

> Activities of Srila Bhaktisiddhanta Sarasvati Thakura

>

> Could anyone suggest a more concise alternative for this section title? It

> is technically correct, as it sums up the contents of the section, but it

> is too long.

>

> NB Part 1 is titled, An Overview of the Activities of Srila

> Bhaktisiddhanta Sarasvati Thakura