Guest guest Posted January 17, 2006 Report Share Posted January 17, 2006 ORIGINAL He advised Gauradäsa that he would be better benefited by utilizing his eagerness for literary matters in service to the Gaudiya Printing Works. SUGGESTED EDIT He advised Gauradäsa that he would be better benefited by utilizing his literary eagerness in service to the Gaudiya Printing Works. Although the suggested edit seems linguistically acceptable, it rings odd in my ears. Comments? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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