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Wishing to alleviate Radha and Krsna's mutual pain of separation...

 

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Wishing to alleviate Radha's and Krsna's mutual pain of separation...

 

 

This is another that to me seems technically correct but sounds odd. Another

possibility:

 

Wishing to alleviate the mutual pain of separation of/felt by/suffered by

Radha and Krsna...

 

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