Guest guest Posted January 23, 2006 Report Share Posted January 23, 2006 > ORIGINAL > > He advised Gauradäsa that he would be better benefited by utilizing his > eagerness for literary matters in service to the Gaudiya Printing Works. > > SUGGESTED EDIT > > He advised Gauradäsa that he would be better benefited by utilizing his > literary eagerness in service to the Gaudiya Printing Works. > > > Although the suggested edit seems linguistically acceptable, it rings odd > in my ears. Comments? Agreed. Sounds odd. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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