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>Question about too many words; the sentence reads:

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>"To the degree the heart is relieved of unwanted habits, to that

>degree we become devoted to Krishna."

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>Does the following still make the same point:

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>"As the heart is relieved of unwanted habits, to that degree we

>become devoted to Krishna."

 

Doesn't work, because the "that" in "to that degree" has no

antecedent.

 

How about:

 

The more we free our hearts of unwanted habits, the more we

become devoted to Krsna.

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