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>Just as every thought, word, and deed of ordinary persons is impelled

>by the deluding influence of the material energy, so similarly the

>movements of pure devotees are lila, conducted under the influence of

>the Supreme Lord's pleasure potency.

 

>Such liberated personalities. . .

 

Though who you mean is probably clear, you're forcing the reader to go

back into the middle of your previous sentence to make sure.

 

 

>come to this world solely to bring others back to that realm which

>they keenly hanker for in separation.

 

The antecedent of "they" is ambiguous. Who's hankering--the "others"

or "such liberated souls"?

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