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> Dandavad. Prabhupada kijaya!

>

> Though also unsolicited, I want to second your advice. I have tried to

> make this a habit and often find on my second draft that I add qualifiers

> like "in my opinion" or "sometimes" to avoid generalizing, which often

> creeps into the first draft. I have observed that many times it is the

> generalizations which are the most disturbing to readers.

>

> Your servant,

> Pancaratna das

 

 

I also found this advice most pertinent. I try to re-read my texts several

times and adjust as per Pancaratna and Srirama prabhu's advise. Once

something is written and sent out, it can end up anywhere. It is important

that even sending a private text, one should never write anything that can

be later misconstrued, even if sent to the most trusted friend.

 

It really does pay to take the time to review what we write, and if there is

any doubt, give some extra time to really consider what we are saying.

 

Just my two bits worth.

 

YS Samba das

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At 07:00 PM 9/12/00 +0500, Samba (das) SDG (Mauritius) wrote:

>> Though also unsolicited, I want to second your advice. I have tried to

>> make this a habit and often find on my second draft that I add qualifiers

>> like "in my opinion" or "sometimes" to avoid generalizing, which often

>> creeps into the first draft. I have observed that many times it is the

>> generalizations which are the most disturbing to readers.

 

>I also found this advice most pertinent. I try to re-read my texts several

>times and adjust as per Pancaratna and Srirama prabhu's advise. Once

>something is written and sent out, it can end up anywhere. It is important

>that even sending a private text, one should never write anything that can

>be later misconstrued, even if sent to the most trusted friend.

>

>It really does pay to take the time to review what we write, and if there is

>any doubt, give some extra time to really consider what we are saying.

>

>Just my two bits worth.

 

I'll throw mine in, too. I've often given this advice (although I must

admit I haven't always followed it, which gives me opportunities to fall at

devotees' feet and apologize). That's one of the advantages of writing: we

can set it aside for a bit, go back to it, and make sure what we publish is

the closest we can come to what we really want to say, and in the way most

likely to have the effect we want.

 

Babhru das

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