Guest guest Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 >Srila Sarasvati Thakura gave much importance to his magazines and >engaged his most erudite disciples in writing for them. But although >they were published under his instruction and with his name as >editor, he did not personally oversee their production. The most >important and influential journals, the Gaudiya and the Harmonist, >were edited by Sundarananda Prabhu and Bhakti Sudhakara Prabhu >respectively, with Vasudeva Prabhu unofficially supervising them. > > >Can "they were" be elided here? No. That would give you a dangling modifier. Moreover, "they" (in "they were published") feels slightly ambiguous as to its antecedent. I'd say "the magazines were published." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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