Guest guest Posted October 4, 2001 Report Share Posted October 4, 2001 Good, so it seems we have added lifestyle and tenure security, plus sustainable and practices. Grammatically it may be better to replace 'and gives' with 'giving', but that is a fine detail. I like what we have for WHY and WHAT and the Vision. Just one further comment. It would be nice if other conference participants would add to the debate so that we could move on with reasonable particpatory approval. Then we can get to WHAT and HOW. Mark --- "ISCOWP (Balabhadra Dasa & Chaya Dasi - USA)" <ISCOWP (AT) pamho (DOT) net> wrote: > > I do think that sustainable is important to add and > lifetime protection. > Also practices is different than principles and > needs to be mentioned. I am > not sure lifestyle is the word we want but I agree > that we do want to ensure > some protection other than rental. My revision is > below and it probably > needs some grammatical corrections. Comments? > > > > > My revision would be> > > To reinvigorate ISKCON farm communities in > accordance > > with the wishes of His Divine Grace.A.C. > > Bhaktivedanta Swami Prabhupada, The ISKCON > Ministry of > > Cow Protection and Agriculture presents a Rural > > Development Plan to establish sustainable > principles > > and practices of land use which encourage > > participation in lifetime-protected cow-based > > agriculture and gives lifestyle and tenure > security to the > > participants. > > > > So the Vision would be: > > > > The Vision is to see ISKCON farms managed > according to > > established sustainable principles and practices > of > > land use which encourage participation in > > lifetime-protected cow-based agriculture and gives > > lifestyle and tenure security to the participants. > > > > > > > > > > NEW from GeoCities - quick and easy web site hosting, just $8.95/month. http://geocities./ps/info1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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