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At 11:28 AM 7/17/2006 -0400, Bhakti Vikasa Swami wrote:

 

>Srila Bhaktisiddhanta Sarasvati pointed out the despicable situation in

>Kuliya, where in the name of dharma women's ashrams had become virtual

>brothels.

>

>Srila Bhaktisiddhanta Sarasvati pointed out the despicable situation in

>Kuliya, where in the name of dharma ashrams established for women had become

>virtual brothels.

>

 

I would say the second one is better because it gives some key info the

first one omits -- namely, that the ashrams were established for women

(presumably by men) but then the women were cruelly exploited (also

presumably by men).

 

But that said, both versions say that the women's ashrams had become

brothels in the name of dharma. That doesn't sound right. Isn't it like this?:

 

 

Srila Bhaktisiddhanta Sarasvati pointed out the despicable situation in

Kuliya, where ashrams established for women in the name of dharma had

become virtual brothels.

 

 

 

 

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