Might this momentarily be read as if it were a list?

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>> "In May 1918 he traveled to Khulna District and at Daulatpur

>> established a Bhaktivinoda Asana, a center for Vaisnava gatherings

>> and propagation of Krsna consciousness."

>>

>> Item 1: a Bhaktivinoda Asana

>>

>> item 2: a center for Vaisnava gatherings

>>

>> item 3: and (third list item expected here)

>

>One point I should have mentioned is that serial commas for lists are

>standard in the book for which this sentence is meant.

 

After "Bhaktivinoda Asana" put "as" instead of a comma, and the

problem goes away.

 

>"We see in your description of activities, songs about rasalasa and

>kunja-bhanga, . . . .

 

"Description of songs"? Ambiguities like this need further attention.