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>Srila Sarasvati Thakura noted that for persons not trained to

>distinguish matter from spirit and to clearly understand

>bhakti-siddhanta, even if they considered themselves devotees and

>spoke the language of bhakti, their usage of words such as prema, and

>indeed their whole approach to bhakti, must be misconstrued and

>reflect merely mundane sentiments and desires.

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>Any comments from the Editing pandits about this sentence?

 

Yes: Break it into three.