Guest guest Posted January 15, 2007 Report Share Posted January 15, 2007 >...is the following acceptable? > >He had misguided others to renounce both prema and dharma by >deserting home to live as a wretched beggar leaving behind weeping >family and friends. The sentence has this problem: Who did the deserting--he or others? The sentence needs to be recast. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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