Guest guest Posted August 23, 2005 Report Share Posted August 23, 2005 Dear Shreeram, You have to cut down some of the graphic representation of your story telling. Some of them being a man taking anything, I myself cannot see it. It is nice, but less of cruel or that which don't make a person vomit. You might say, something which is natural to you may not be natural to others on this. I like what you say.. Thanks Anand Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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