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Dear Shreeram(Dattu),

 

SavitriSavitri had to cross the netherworldTo bring Satyavan back to the world Sacrifice is a strength of love to gainThe three worlds but is never in vain!The love that Savitri had in her heartDid not let Satyavan from her to partThe light of knowledge was so brightThe world was inundated by her light!This day we remember her story againYet she wanted we should truly regainOur strength to nurture this world trueFor Savitri is born again as me and you!Light that could defy the law of natureIs Savitri who lights up all three worldsShe is revered as her love truly shoneWhen she beat Yama by her wit alone!JUNE 3rd Savitri Pooja 2008

 

By A.

 

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Reply by Shreeram Balijepalli(Pet name:Dattu):

 

Dear A Ma,

 

Your poem is beautiful.

 

However,Savitri did not cross the netherworld but Vaitharini river to go into the Netherworld/Hellplane. Let me pen a reply poem like this...I have added a few images which expresses my feelings of each verse closely...Just flying the pegasus of poetic inspiration...

Savitri of Yore 'cross Vaitharani lent,Bringing Satyavan from Infinite gripLove, a human vessel of ascent,Shown by this supernal trip

Savitri of yore was love inborn,Bringing Satyavan's corpse aforthWhere doth Yama go forlorn?When love and longing is the very mirth!

Savitri was born again today,Febrile,my fingers, type words,Dattu, unborn and into happiness-sway,When will my soul be free like birds?

Savitri of light ethereal,A moment when inner lamps are lit,Lust for love and all that is corporeal,Smothers down in an eternal pit.

Yama at-her in beweliderance,Sought repose in Karma and beyond,Satyavan in deliveranceAnd in Savitri's embrace and bond Shreeram Balijepalli

 

 

 

 

 

Purity, Powers, Parabrahmam...

IIशà¥à¤°à¥€à¤°à¤¾à¤® बलिजेपलà¥à¤²à¥€ II

 

 

 

 

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Recently a discourse with Sri Karunamayi I learned

that Savitri received this immense power to reveal Her wisdom with

Yama Death through Her devotion to Gayatree Mantra . It was truly

such beautiful discourse .

Joanna

> Dear Shreeram(Dattu),

> & nbsp;

> Savitri

> Savitri had to cross the netherworld

> To bring Satyavan back to the world

> Sacrifice is a strength of love to gain

> The three worlds but is never in vain!

> The love that Savitri had in her heart

> Did not let Satyavan from her to part

> The light of knowledge was so bright

> The world was inundated by her light!

> This day we remember her story again

> Yet she wanted we should truly regain

> Our strength to nurture this world true

> For Savitri is born again as me and you!

> Light that could defy the law of nature

> Is Savitri who lights up all three worlds

> She is revered as her love truly shone

> When she beat Yama by her wit alone!

> JUNE 3rd Savitri Pooja 2008

> & nbsp;

> By A.

> & nbsp;

> --------------------------

> Reply by Shreeram Balijepalli(Pet name:Dattu):

> & nbsp;

> Dear A Ma,

> & nbsp;

> Your poem is beautiful.

> & nbsp;

> However,Savitri did not cross the netherworld but Vaitharini river to go into

the

Netherworld/Hellplane.

> & nbsp;

> Let me pen a reply poem like this...I have added a few images which expresses

my

feelings of each verse closely...Just flying the pegasus of poetic

inspiration...

> & nbsp;

> & nbsp;

> Savitri of Yore 'cross Vaitharani lent,

> Bringing Satyavan from Infinite grip

> Love, a human vessel of ascent,

> Shown by this supernal trip

> & nbsp;

> & nbsp;

> Savitri of yore was love inborn,

> Bringing Satyavan's corpse aforth

> Where doth Yama go forlorn?

> When love and longing is the very mirth!

> & nbsp;

> & nbsp;

> Savitri was born again today,

> Febrile,my fingers, type words,

> Dattu, unborn and into happiness-sway,

> When will my soul be free like birds?

> & nbsp;

> & nbsp;

> Savitri of light ethereal,

> A moment when inner lamps are lit,

> Lust for love and all that is corporeal,

> Smothers down in an eternal pit.

> & nbsp;

> & nbsp;

> Yama & nbsp; at-her in beweliderance,

> Sought repose in Karma and beyond,

> Satyavan in deliverance

> And in Savitri's embrace and bond & nbsp;

> & nbsp;

> Shreeram Balijepalli

> & nbsp;

Purity, Powers, Parabrahmam...

> IIशà¥à¤°à¥€à¤°à¤¾à¤® बलिजेपलà¥à¤²à¥€ II & nbsp;

> & nbsp;

> & nbsp;

>

>

>

> Click to join Rajarajeshwari_Kalpataru

>

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