Guest guest Posted February 14, 2005 Report Share Posted February 14, 2005 Dear Danny, This is a lovely poem; like everything you write it is expressive and introspective. Beneath the lightheartedness is insight and warm sensitivity. I especially love the last two lines; 'I fly above,and then I sing I'm butterfly in my true being..!!' Warm regards, Semira Danny wrote; The fly in the wind- I'm just a fly in the wind When I let my wings spring I still remember ,and I sing I'm butterfly in my true being.!!. I love commas(they love me) Nothing I could do,you see? Try to find my true desire Am I fly,or just vampire? Maybe fly,or maybe butter Maybe butter,maybe fly Who's to ask,who's to say why? Being with God is all that matter.!!. I'm just a fly in the wind But when I let my wings spring I fly above,and then I sing I'm butterfly in my true being..!! ................. danny:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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