Guest guest Posted February 25, 2007 Report Share Posted February 25, 2007 1) I had tasted indoctrination, and became a sad by books case of inoculation/ gone terribly wrong, a sad song of sorrow wailing, in-audibly on///? 2)still i saw my self as something, thumping/ as my ego tried desperatley to stand for something/// 3)and in the process hopelessness built a nest/ its deaths sweet caress- slows breaths -i was depressed/// 4)and searched for, something greater/ whose real appearence made like stealths- off the radar/// 5)ghost image, the holy -posted scrimmage/ my vices vintage had me absorbed in their lables printing(printin)/// 6)mesmerized, completely blinded by their crimsons tides/ and bound by their effects becoming paralyzed /// 7)but dark times will degrade when the sun gives way/ shimmering shards of amber made day and i jubilee(pronounce it: jube -a- lay)/// 8) awoke from my slumber/ long awaited hope for the hunger was quenched and the longing was cast asunder/// 9)to fanfare of roaring thunder/ and lightening bolts travelled my spine connecting me straight to the awe and wonder/// 10)Of God the Mother, her creation and witness state in/which it is stated- God the father's image is made in/// 11)and in that maiden, voyage in which the maiden/ showed me myself inside the heart beautifully placed in/// 12)my heart began racing/ tears flowed like the ganges and ancient shore lines of anger were replaced when/// 13)joy's many faces, began welling up from unknown places/ and that was just a taste of what was to come if let my self embrace it/// 14) with open arms, take the love back free of charge through open palms/ but thats just the first step on this path I'm on, the path to God./// by: Kyyan Volk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted February 26, 2007 Report Share Posted February 26, 2007 Dear Kyyan, i appreciate your song-writing and i recognise a 'hip-hop' beat... violet , " v_koa " <v_koa wrote: > > 1) I had tasted indoctrination, and became a sad by books case of inoculation/ > > gone terribly wrong, a sad song of sorrow wailing, > in-audibly on///? > > 2)still i saw my self as something, thumping/ > as my ego tried desperatley to stand for something/// > > 3)and in the process hopelessness built a nest/ > its deaths sweet caress- slows breaths -i was depressed/// > > 4)and searched for, something greater/ > whose real appearence made like stealths- off the radar/// > > 5)ghost image, the holy -posted scrimmage/ > my vices vintage had me absorbed in their lables printing(printin)/ // > > 6)mesmerized, completely blinded by their crimsons tides/ > and bound by their effects becoming paralyzed /// > > 7)but dark times will degrade when the sun gives way/ > shimmering shards of amber made day and i jubilee(pronounce it: jube -a- lay)/// > > 8) awoke from my slumber/ > long awaited hope for the hunger was quenched and the longing was cast asunder/// > > 9)to fanfare of roaring thunder/ > and lightening bolts travelled my spine connecting me straight to the awe and wonder/// > > 10)Of God the Mother, her creation and witness state in/which it is stated- God the > father's image is made in/// > > 11)and in that maiden, voyage in which the maiden/ > showed me myself inside the heart beautifully placed in/// > > 12)my heart began racing/ > tears flowed like the ganges and ancient shore lines of anger were replaced when/// > > 13)joy's many faces, began welling up from unknown places/ > and that was just a taste of what was to come if let my self embrace it/// > > 14) with open arms, take the love back free of charge through open palms/ > but thats just the first step on this path I'm on, the path to God./ // > > by: Kyyan Volk > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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