Guest guest Posted May 7, 2001 Report Share Posted May 7, 2001 1) It is amazing how many responses can be generated from one little remark! :-) 2) My original remark was from a " reaction " I had from reading Dan's post. When I got finished reading it, I was cross-eyed! All of the repetitions, not really alliterations, but close! I didn't really analyze the sentence for syntax, it may have been very well written. But the readability of the sentences, from an English Lit point of view, was close to zero. No problem there, just an ego reaction and a chuckle. As you say, moving onward... Beck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted May 7, 2001 Report Share Posted May 7, 2001 Dear Beck, Sometimes getting cross-eyed can be the beginning of something beautiful! Who knows? Dan 1) It is amazing how many responses can be generated from one little remark! :-) 2) My original remark was from a " reaction " I had from reading Dan's post. When I got finished reading it, I was cross-eyed! All of the repetitions, not really alliterations, but close! I didn't really analyze the sentence for syntax, it may have been very well written. But the readability of the sentences, from an English Lit point of view, was close to zero. No problem there, just an ego reaction and a chuckle. As you say, moving onward... Beck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted May 7, 2001 Report Share Posted May 7, 2001 I had a blind date once that once cross-eyed. She wasn't the start of something beautiful. :-( Beck At 12:19 PM 5/7/01 , you wrote: Dear Beck, Sometimes getting cross-eyed can be the beginning of something beautiful! Who knows? Dan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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