Guest guest Posted September 13, 2005 Report Share Posted September 13, 2005 My mind is Vacant... like the empty sky. No body, no form... I AM utterly Alone. No border, no confine... I AM empty Infinite! A vacuum within... that is ever unfilled. I look to you... to make it alive... to make it breathe! .... Touch it with your lips, give it your beats. Songs to my heart, and dance to my feet. Let the Separation cease... make me Complete. Roam in my blood, ....spread in my breathe. .... I have found many things, so lovely... so dear. Yet sooner or later, all have disappeared. You come this time ....and merge forever! .... I AM so utterly Alone... make me complete... make me Whole! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted September 14, 2005 Report Share Posted September 14, 2005 Nisargadatta , " adithya_comming " <adithya_comming> wrote: > My mind is Vacant... > like the empty sky. > > No body, no form... > I AM utterly Alone. > > No border, no confine... > I AM empty Infinite! > > A vacuum within... > that is ever unfilled. > > I look to you... > to make it alive... to make it breathe! > > ... > > > Touch it with your lips, > give it your beats. > > Songs to my heart, > and dance to my feet. > > Let the Separation cease... > make me Complete. > > Roam in my blood, > ...spread in my breathe. > > > ... > > > I have found many things, > so lovely... so dear. > > Yet sooner or later, > all have disappeared. > > You come this time > ...and merge forever! > > ... > > > I AM so utterly Alone... > make me complete... make me Whole! ---------------------------- it sounds like, from your poem, you just need to get laid. there's definitely alot of repressed sexual tension in your writing. dannyc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted September 14, 2005 Report Share Posted September 14, 2005 Nisargadatta , " dannyc_1eyeluv " <dannyc_1eyeluv> wrote: > Nisargadatta , " adithya_comming " > <adithya_comming> wrote: > > My mind is Vacant... > > like the empty sky. > > > > No body, no form... > > I AM utterly Alone. > > > > No border, no confine... > > I AM empty Infinite! > > > > A vacuum within... > > that is ever unfilled. > > > > I look to you... > > to make it alive... to make it breathe! > > > > ... > > > > > > Touch it with your lips, > > give it your beats. > > > > Songs to my heart, > > and dance to my feet. > > > > Let the Separation cease... > > make me Complete. > > > > Roam in my blood, > > ...spread in my breathe. > > > > > > ... > > > > > > I have found many things, > > so lovely... so dear. > > > > Yet sooner or later, > > all have disappeared. > > > > You come this time > > ...and merge forever! > > > > ... > > > > > > I AM so utterly Alone... > > make me complete... make me Whole! > > > ---------------------------- > > > it sounds like, from your poem, you just need to get laid. there's > definitely alot of repressed sexual tension in your writing. > > dannyc Yes, Danny! Perhaps, you are a SEX or psychology Expert... .... Perhaps, two hours of invigorating sex that I had one day back was NOT nearly... Enough to quench my thirst! Perhaps, I do need more... Let me try Tonight! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted September 14, 2005 Report Share Posted September 14, 2005 Nisargadatta , " dannyc_1eyeluv " <dannyc_1eyeluv> wrote: > Nisargadatta , " adithya_comming " > <adithya_comming> wrote: > > My mind is Vacant... > > like the empty sky. > > > > No body, no form... > > I AM utterly Alone. > > > > No border, no confine... > > I AM empty Infinite! > > > > A vacuum within... > > that is ever unfilled. > > > > I look to you... > > to make it alive... to make it breathe! > > > > ... > > > > > > Touch it with your lips, > > give it your beats. > > > > Songs to my heart, > > and dance to my feet. > > > > Let the Separation cease... > > make me Complete. > > > > Roam in my blood, > > ...spread in my breathe. > > > > > > ... > > > > > > I have found many things, > > so lovely... so dear. > > > > Yet sooner or later, > > all have disappeared. > > > > You come this time > > ...and merge forever! > > > > ... > > > > > > I AM so utterly Alone... > > make me complete... make me Whole! > > > ---------------------------- > > > it sounds like, from your poem, you just need to get laid. there's > definitely alot of repressed sexual tension in your writing. > > dannyc actually I was thinking just the opposite. hmmm.... you know what they say - what we see in others is a reflection of ourselves. :-) clay Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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