Guest guest Posted December 31, 2005 Report Share Posted December 31, 2005 L:How about doing it this way. P: Howaboutdoingithisway? ) The poem you wrote, is nice, but I didn't write a poem. I wrote what I wrote, it's my style. No one can tell me their style is better than mine. Your grammar is better, but not your style. Art is not what you do, poetry is not only the way you like to write. And truth is not what you believe, 'What is' will always be bigger than what you believe. To become 'What is' all beliefs must be dropped, dig? Now, I will always appreciate your grammar corrections. But, you need a conceptual haircut. Have scissors, will travel, house calls available. ) Pete NNB WHAT IS A YEAR! But what is a year? A turn, a spin The Earth merry-go-round. A fast sliding one, Never revolving on the same spot twice. The solar system has its Own merry-go- round That goes around the Galaxy. That galactic year lasts 200 million years, Give or take a few. Last time that new year was celebrated, Dinosaurs drank Champaign And partied hearty. And yes, it's best If you celebrate it today, It's not likely Humans will be around 200 million years from now. And, oh!, This year will have an extra second. So don't let it go to waste, Use it well. Happy new 200 million years! Editing by Larry Epston Artist, musician, poet and songwriter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted December 31, 2005 Report Share Posted December 31, 2005 In a message dated 12/31/2005 9:42:22 AM Pacific Standard Time, pedsie4 writes: > To become 'What is' > all beliefs must be dropped, dig? > L.E. You're still in the before stage, I'm in the after stage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You are posting as a guest. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.
Note: Your post will require moderator approval before it will be visible.