Guest guest Posted January 11, 2006 Report Share Posted January 11, 2006 Very nice. But the last four lines are a completely separate thought (to me). I like it *without* the last four lines. Bill Nisargadatta , " Anna Ruiz " <nli10u@c...> wrote: > > I keep slipping into that hole > Where time goes > And here I notice a vortex of myself > Past present and future me-s > Roads I had not taken for > The fear in me > Or perhaps I sensed an alternate reality > Where I had already trudged this long > And winding road, > Traversing elliptical obscurities of myself > Designations and proclamations > Insinuated in the dawn of time immemorial > When the gasses coalesced > And a spark of light > Became the knowing of movement > And this I knew for sure back then, > When my creature comfort had no bounds, > Had no theories and evolved because, > Just because it is the way of things, > In the One thought of God, > Becoming All That Is. > Was. > Will be. > > Love. > > > > > Ana > > > > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 11, 2006 Report Share Posted January 11, 2006 - billrishel Nisargadatta Wednesday, January 11, 2006 8:56 AM Re: I Am An Alternate Reality Very nice. But the last four lines are a completely separate thought (to me). I like it *without* the last four lines. Bill Tres bon,c'est bon, Bill, I added the last 4 lines as an afterthought ;-) Ana Nisargadatta , " Anna Ruiz " <nli10u@c...> wrote: > > I keep slipping into that hole > Where time goes > And here I notice a vortex of myself > Past present and future me-s > Roads I had not taken for > The fear in me > Or perhaps I sensed an alternate reality > Where I had already trudged this long > And winding road, > Traversing elliptical obscurities of myself > Designations and proclamations > Insinuated in the dawn of time immemorial > When the gasses coalesced > And a spark of light > Became the knowing of movement > And this I knew for sure back then, > When my creature comfort had no bounds, > Had no theories and evolved because, > Just because it is the way of things, > In the One thought of God, > Becoming All That Is. > Was. > Will be. > > Love. > > > > > Ana > > > > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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