Guest guest Posted January 16, 2006 Report Share Posted January 16, 2006 P: Very nice! First poem of yours I liked. Crows eating carrion, Butterflies drinking dew. Both, just This. To discriminate, to blame, to praise is to fall into a hell of your own making. Where devils will torture, and angels will sooth you, only so you will feel pain again, in its cruel healing purity. NNB If the shoe fits..... Crows on a wire They perch inside the Nisargardatta group Like crows on a wire, Waiting for fresh meat to arrive, Helpless, vulnerable and unsuspecting. Parading with good intentions, They wait until the victim Opens his heart, then the sharp beaks Start pecking at the soft tender meat. They depend on the victim to be shocked At the attack, And suspend his own defenses Until it is too late. Like Sarah, Pecked to death when she arrived, Innocent and unsuspecting, They crowded in, Drawn by the smell of blood, And the heat of unsuspecting flesh. Mercilessly, they leapt into the feast, First one vicious snap and then another, Devouring her sweet innocence, With self-pleasure and smirks At their petty power and trickery. Each word has a sharp edge, And the blades did their work quickly, She lay ravaged and beaten is a few moments. Laying there, eyes wide open, In psychic death, Bleeding, Quiet, Still. Click! Larry Epston www.epston.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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