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Not sure who your message was directed at Ms. Sharma, but let me

hazard a response :-)

 

Neither the message nor the words are important, but the need to

understand and the effort made therefore to understand! This is so

true for something like jyotish even more so. The texts were nearly

all written in flowery verse, not prose (!) and were pithy, at times

convoluted, subject to variable interpretation and certainly were not

written for grade 7 or 8 level as most modern magazines require their

authors to aim at!

 

Surely jyotish can be written that way too, and the literature is

replete with books, booklets, pamphlets and articles and many

messages too. How well those 'work' would be something individuals

would need to examine.

 

Perhaps jyotish and obfuscation go hand in hand, some peanut gallery

critics would say, perhaps natural selection is at work <guffaw!>

 

RR

 

, Shailla Sharma

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> Try saying things in simple language. Your message is hidden,

behind the reams of flowery words, and lost. The most effective prose

is that which is direct, simple and to the point. Is it the message

or the words which are the point of it all?

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