Guest guest Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 sri:Sri NVS swamin,dasoham.adiyen started to proof read the sama upakarma pdf doc. I have a copy of reprint of Sama upAkarma in sanskrit compiled by Dr. C. Sankara Rama sastri in 1956, re-published by Bhavani center/Giri publication in 2001.swamin, adiyen is checked only sanskrit part. In some places, in English part verb is missing like trupyatam etcWe would need to proof read English part separately. Let adiyen check samskrit first. 1. First one is grammatical I noted. 2. veda mantram gum is written as m on the top in many places. example: verse 63. rakshaagumsi as rakshaamsiIn some verses, swamin wrote as trupyataam whereas in Sankara Rama sastri & Also Sri Paranur swamin book the verb used is trupyEtaam. The verse numbers are: 29 ; indraagnee trupyEtaam (trupyataam)40, skandavisaakhau trupyEtaam48, staavara jangame trupyEtaam In english side trupyetaam missing.57, vasudevau trpyetaam128 . dyaavaa pruthivee trpyetaamIn verse 54, some words are missing in between in pdf doc.Missing words are underlined here:trayascha trigumsacha trayascha treeni chaIn verse 55, devaaha trupyantaam ( NOT trupyantu)In verse 56, devaa manushya ( no visargam in devaa) - visargam is the error In verse 68, mahaavyaahrutayaha (Not gru)In verse 71, jugumshi (NOT jumshi)The following words should be deerrgam (elongated):verse 122) brahmaa trpyatuverse 126) saavitree trpyatuverse 128) prutihvee trpyetaam ( NOT pruthivi trpyataam)verse 137 & 138 are in the same line. should be separated.verse 137 ) rakshaagumschaiva verse 138) is missing which is itara ganaahaa trpyantuverse 139) should be bhutaagumschaiva (NOT bhutaam)Next Jaimini is the start of rshi tarpanam (included with deva tarpanam)As per Sankara Rama sastri there is another tarpana mantram before jaimini.sumantus trpyatujaimini trpyatu........praatitheyee trpyatumaitraayanee trpyatu ( add this)daakshaayanee trpyatu (add this)FROM namo brahmane trptirastu TO namo vaishravanaaya cha trptirastu IS DEVA TARPANAM, NOT Rshi tarpanam.More later.dasan.NOTE: Adiyen attached part of utsarjana tarpanam for the swamin to understand what I've written above. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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