Pay ATTENTION RIGHT NOW, or you'll lose something precious in 5 days!

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Hi group,

 

I just uploaded a letter to the files section.

 

Here's the DEAL, and how you can get a TOTALLY FREE $97 DVD (or even

a $197 Chi Kung DVD set) of a certain Chi Kung Secret! A secret that

virtually no one else seems to know in the Martial Arts.

 

The letter is a brand new advertisement copy for my martial arts

school.

 

We do private one-on-one trainings and every new year I write new

copy for the clientel I'm attempting to attract.

 

Right now it's in the form of a letter, a letter that is handed out

to prospective clients by students THAT ALREADY TRAIN at my studio.

 

The letter I'm handing out also has two martial arts actions photos

on it. The one in the files does not. Why? Because I ran out of

time, and I want the copy checked, NOT the photos.

 

The letter will soon be adapted into newspaper format.

 

The newspaper format depends on the feedback I get from this group,

and from the people it is handed out to by my students.

 

Have fun reading it.

 

Have fun reading each paragraph, and making notes about what I'm

doing consciously and subconsciously.

 

After you read each paragraph, step back a bit and look at the big

picure and notice the many different flows, and readership paths

through the copy.

 

Chunk up and chunk down. Chunk sideways if you want, and use the

same formate to sell one of your own products.

 

That way you can save yourself $15,000 bucks!

 

That's what I charge to write someone else's copy.

 

And just to critique someones' copy, I do charge $500 bucks, which

is only fair since they'll make millions off of it if it is used

properly.

 

And, for the ones that do a REAL BANG UP JOB of analizing the

letter, writting about it pros and cons, and then writting to THIS

GROUP about what they think, BASED UPON their feelings, and their

PROPULSION SYSTEMS, their towards, away froms, and CONVINCER

STRATEGIES, I will send them FREE OF CHARGE a $97 DVD on Secrets of

Chi Kung.

 

In fact, if your critique is REAL GOOD I'll even send you a " FREE "

$197 Chi Kung DVD set!

 

And you got to earn it!

 

Why am I doing this?

 

A good question.

 

It's because I'm a real huggy feely Prince of a guy and I love my

people.

 

It's because it's the Season Holidays, and I DESIRE TO GIVE MY

PRODUCTIVE members of both my groups a neat holiday gift.

 

And, because of my meta-program that one must earn what one gets, I

can only give it to those that earn it.

 

Fair?

 

Now you are probably asking, " Doc, there must be a catch! " ...

 

....and you are right.

 

There are two of them.

 

CATCH #1. I will charge you the " shipping and handling " .

 

So if you live in the States it might cost $7-$10 bucks. If you live

in Italy it'll cost about $70 bucks for the P & H.

 

Either way, YOU STILL COME OUT A WINNER!

 

CATCH #2. This ad file will be pulled in 5 days. THEN IT IS " GONE "

FOREVER!

 

NOTE! I will NOT give this out for a superficial, low level

analisis. You must have reasons marketing wise, NLP wise and Energy

Psychology wise, etc for what you state.

 

I'm not expecting any Gary Halberts or John Carltons to come forth,

but I am expecting those that do the analisis to spend a few hours

of deep thought, going over the values and beliefs of the ones I'm

sending it to, and of the values and beliefs of those in the letter.

 

Fair?

 

Sincerely

 

Ps. Because I'm sort of secretive with my ad copy, I am pulling that

file in 5 days. The ones that " get off the pot " will have plenty of

time. The procrastinators will just email in about 10 days to a few

months and whine and beg because they'll have lost out on some real

valid, important, and costly experiences THAT ARE TOTALLY FREE, and

they might get a $197 FREE DVD set.

Pay ATTENTION RIGHT NOW, or you'll lose something precious in 5 days