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> Sorry if I seem challenging to some of these issues, but they hit on

> some fundamental concepts that I think need exploring, i.e.

> classifying Chinese herbs within western terms for 1...

 

Totally fine. I agree. And by the way, hi Jason! Hope things are going

well for you in Colorado, is it?

 

I appreciate all this discussion. I wanted to make the PULSE peer-reviewed,

but honestly didn't expect much interest from CM experts. More on that

below.

 

> I actually don't think this is answered . a) YES san qi is said to

> have a coagulate effect, although I think Bensky says that in vivo it

> has no haemostatic properties in powdered form (from memory - someone

> should re-check)...

 

I'd be checking the dates of the research- does Bensky give dates for the

research he quotes? Not in the text, but perhaps in the back? His source

could be outdated. Did any other study back it up?

 

> So yes san qi is in the FORMULA YNBY but is YNBY

> a STRONG Coagulate??? This is not said anywhere to my knowledge.

> Remember formulas are not individual herb properties... It has been

> proven that many individual functions or (biochem constituents) are

> changed when cooked or taken with other herbs.

 

Good point- do you have a good example, or which HbF was proven to have

different fxs from its constituents?

 

I certainly accept that HbF's could have multiple vectors (of action),

perhaps even opposite ones at the same time. Otherwise, they'd be just like

drugs, or totally inactive. As I said before, I'd bet YNBY has some complex

hemodynamics, and I'd love to see what they are, or have them explained to

me. But, I just try to watch out for my assumptions- I don't assume that all

HbF are superior to or more elegant than all drugs, e.g.

 

> No I do not agree! there is much more going on here then 1 idea about

> 1 herb (especially a western idea) - there is also a blood moving

> component. I don't think it is that black & white. And again is there

> source for that? Do we have any cases of strokes occurring with pre-

> op surgery use? Or any other documented cases of other problems? The

> article mentions generally herb problems but not specific YNBY, this

> is why I said , why single YNBY out.

 

As far as I know, all we know is:

 

1. Some CM docs think that YNBY provides for surprising healing

2. There is controversy about whether YNBY is safe before surgery

3. Adverse events do happen with surgery, but we do not have an airtight

system of communication and recordkeeping about herbal use pre-surgery

between CM docs and WM docs. So we cannot make correlations to see if YNBY

might have caused strokes, clots, etc. We can only speculate.

 

> Also I.e. just san qi also increases blood flow in the coronary

> artery, dilation of vessels, decrease arterial pressure, heart rate,

> oxy consumption etc etc.

 

Source?

 

>> We never studied the McLean book- we had

>> Fratkin's.

>

> This brings an important point, I believe. First I think it is great

> that you are going out there and helping educate people about CM.

 

Thanks.

 

> But let us look at something. I think if you are going to do a piece

> on YNBY (or any other topic), you should really check the sources out

> there making sure that you have all the info.

 

I'd be happy to do that if I had all the books. At this time, I do not own

a complete library. For example, I'd love to have the $170 pharmacology of

herbs by kee huang, but I can't afford it. Nor does PCOM have it, nor can I

get them to buy it. However, it you would like to complete my library, I'd

be happy to accept donations ;-) In a perfect world, I would be able to

write the perfect article before you saw it. But in the real world, we all

need help, such as the input you are providing. Thanks!

 

BTW, I will be revising those articles to include all this input.

 

> I think you are

> putting yourself out as expert on the subject- especially with many

> of the BOLD statements made. But what if I had a patient and I gave

> them YNBY post/pre surgery (as I did 4 weeks ago) and they did an

> internet search and saw this article. And saw how you had never heard

> of such a practice and how crazy this was etc. This has the potential

> of uncertainty in the eyes of my patient.

 

Actually, that is a wonderful point- the AMA MD's stick together- one never

criticizes another doctor, without risking exile. We should decide as a

profession if we agree with that ethos. Unfortunately, there is so much

plurality in CM, that it is unlikely we'd all be able to agree on much of

anything. We could all agree, however, to give other CM docs the benefit of

the doubt. That may be neccesary for our survival.

 

That addresses credibility in the eyes of the patient/public, but sidesteps

other issues, such as quality care, safety, and how to determine when a CM

doc is out of line. Since we don't have a standard of care in place to the

degree that WM does, and we rely on national or state lic boards for

discipline, diagnoses and treatments don't get reviewed by a third party, do

they? Even if they did, could we make any judgements about right and wrong?

There are many more " right " answers in CM, or such is the assumption. I

think there's more here, but moving on...

 

> Point being, if bold statements are going to be made, I think one

> should be an expert (years of experience) or at least check all the

> sources in the language. It goes along with the whole

> discussion, " How are we going to present ourselves to the public "

> etc... The internet as great as it is, can allow anyone to say

> anything, including my own babble right here. But we should all be

> careful.

 

I started writing to the public more than 4 years ago. Even with one year

in school, I could see plenty of basics we'd learned about which they had no

idea. And still, 99% (guessing) of America has no idea that acupuncture is

only one treatment modality, that Chinese herbs are based in a system of

medicine, that Chinese medicine is a separate and equally valid medical

system. I've made hardly a dent. It's going to take a long time. To that

end, I am writing a book (I can hear the gasps already), and have a literary

agent looking into publishers right now.

 

I haven't seen much interest from other CM professionals in writing to the

public. Most of them prefer to keep it " in house " in discussions like

these, or trade journals, and all of that serves its own purpose, but it's

light-years from the reality of patients. Unless you're going to spend 4

years educating each member of the public about CM, you have to talk to them

differently. I think my 4 years of writing to the public, hearing their

concerns, and answering their questions has resulted in its own specialized

skill-set.

 

As has been pointed out here and in other groups, we can't keep our heads in

the sand if we want professional autonomy, respect, and equality with other

medicines. We have to engage in politics, law, and education. Patient

education is a vast frontier. I'd say it's relatively uncharted here in

America. For example, how do we (or DO we) explain qi, what with all the

controversy about its proper translation and meaning?

 

Throughout Oriental Medicine, there are many questions, many gray areas, and

much disagreement amongst experts. How do we solve that? Or, if plurality

is ok, how do we present it? I do not believe that years of experience (at

what, by the way? practice? scholarship?) is the key to patient education.

A Japanese acupuncturist with years of experience, a Chinese-translating

herbalist with years of experience, and an acupuncturist educated 15 years

ago who hasn't kept up with new literature and translations but has years of

experience practicing on patients may all totally disagree on what Chinese

medicine is, how it should be practiced, how it should be presented to

patients, let alone the fine points and details of discussions such as one

herb formula in one situation.

 

There is a lot of diversity to convey. Years of experience in one area do

not translate to expertise in conveying the breadth and depth of Oriental

Medicine. In fact, years of experience in one area may actually bias and

hinder one from dealing fairly with plurality.

 

Clear statements sound bold. When there is a lack of clarity, we include

many " if...then " s and qualifications, etc. And we show that we don't really

know. E.g. YNBY pre-surgery. We really don't know. Ok, then let's err on

the side of caution. It's nice to have a conclusion. Readers like that.

Writing for the public is requires with not only scholarship, authenticity,

and accuracy, but also clarity, entertainment, and interest.

 

All that said, I agree, we should be careful in what we say to the public.

And, I admit that at times I get impatient and take the lone ranger

approach. But, the PULSE is an open forum. I've always invited anyone who

wanted to write to the public to submit articles. Few people do. Few have

the passion and patience to write to patients, which is ok, everyone's

different...

 

But, if you don't want to write, to contribute to the effort, then feel free

to " peer-review " the articles, especially in reference to the sources you

have available to you. I'd be happy to create an official " peer-review "

board, if people are actually willing to engage in that process... it

doesn't pay anything, and articles would have to be reviewed in a timely

manner. Let me know if anyone's interested.

 

But don't tell me to stop writing to them just because you disagree with one

point in one article, or because you own a book that I don't! Criticism is

useful to a point, but can also be crippling and divisive. Ever heard that

statement, " Perfectionism leads to procrastination, leads to paralysis, " or

the " Paralysis of analysis " ? I'm a firm believer in making progress as an

imperfect human being. And I ain't stopping.

 

All the best,

B

 

 

 

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> I'd be happy to do that if I had all the books. At this time, I do not own

> a complete library. For example, I'd love to have the $170 pharmacology of

> herbs by kee huang, but I can't afford it. Nor does PCOM have it, nor can I

> get them to buy it. However, it you would like to complete my library, I'd

> be happy to accept donations ;-) In a perfect world, I would be able to

> write the perfect article before you saw it. But in the real world, we all

> need help, such as the input you are providing. Thanks!

 

and thus the reason for the existence of CHA is underscored again. I started

this organization exactly because my own library was inadequate at the time,

my experience was more limited and I did not have access to chinese language

materials. I wanted to use the internet to reach out to others in the field who

could help me fill holes in my knowledge while I built my library, got more

experience and figured out how to access chinese source material (the last one

admittedly a long time coming). Now with 800 members around the world,

some with decades of clinical experience, others who read chinese fluently,

researchers, product developers, biochemists, veterinarians, nurses, NDs, DCs,

philosophers, linguists, publishers, editors, writers, teachers, etc., I do feel

like

I have that access. My thoughts on many subjects have been influenced by

the debates here. sometimes subtly, sometimes moreso, sometimes in the

opposite direction intended by other members. and there's only more to come.

:-)

 

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>

> and thus the reason for the existence of CHA is underscored again.

I started

> this organization exactly because my own library was inadequate at

the time,

> my experience was more limited and I did not have access to chinese

language

> materials. I wanted to use the internet to reach out to others in

the field who

> could help me fill holes in my knowledge while I built my library,

got more

> experience and figured out how to access chinese source material

(the last one

> admittedly a long time coming). Now with 800 members around the

world,

> some with decades of clinical experience, others who read chinese

fluently,

> researchers, product developers, biochemists, veterinarians,

nurses, NDs, DCs,

> philosophers, linguists, publishers, editors, writers, teachers,

etc., I do feel like

> I have that access. My thoughts on many subjects have been

influenced by

> the debates here. sometimes subtly, sometimes moreso, sometimes in

the

> opposite direction intended by other members. and there's only

more to come.

> :-)

 

The convergence of people in this group

continues to astonish me. I want to

thank you, again, for your seemingly

tireless efforts to keep this forum

vital.

 

The exchange of viewpoints that takes

place here is an essential part of the

growth and development of the ideas

that continue to constitute the actual

foundations of the subject.

 

Ken

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At 12:43 PM -0700 6/6/03, Brian Carter wrote:

Actually, that is a wonderful point-

the AMA MD's stick together- one never

criticizes another doctor, without risking exile. We should

decide as a

profession if we agree with that

ethos.

--

 

Try reading the letters columns of JAMA, NEJM, and Lancet. I'd

say that the level of criticism amongst MDs was robust and

continuous.

 

Rory

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While I appreciate some people's heart-felt desire to spread the " good

news " of acupuncture and Chinese medicine, having made the mistake

myself of writing and publishing about Chinese medicine too soon in

my career and education, I can tell you how deleterious it is to the

profession to prematurely attempt to write (either for the profession

or for the public). Because the profession as whole has a less than

scholarly relationship with reading, writing, and words in general,

many members of the profession are easily influenced by things they

see in print, even those things meant for lay readers. When a person

writes before their " wine has matured, " they may be putting into print

erroneous ideas that then become rooted in the " common wisdom " of

patients and practitioners alike. Ken has touted Unschuld's new book

as a possible remedy for some of the widely held myths about Chinese

medicine. But how where these myths established in the first place? By

well intentioned writers who did not truly know what they were writing

about.

 

I very much cop to having made this mistake myself. By attempting to

write about Chinese medicine too soon in my career, I am responsible

for a number of erroneous notions that come back to haunt me on an

almost daily basis (since so many of them pop up here on the CHA

forum). It's like the introduction of a foreign species which then

becomes a weed that is almost impossible to root out and eradicate

once it's taken hold.

 

Many years ago, I was taught that the benefit of a teacher is to teach

you how not to make the same mistakes others have made before. The

teacher is supposed to be a guide who has traveled the path ahead of

you and knows from first-hand experience the wrong turns and pit-falls

up ahead. Having made this mistake myself and learned through hard

experience, I sincerely caution other young practitioners not to

attempt to write about Chinese medicine for publication too soon. Not

only will it cause you grief personally, it may have deleterious

effects on the very profession you are attempting to serve.

 

So then, the question is how soon is too soon, and that's a hard

question to answer. It depends in part on how good your source

materials are. Those people who have direct and immediate access (via

reading Chinese) to the whole Chinese medical literature are in a very

different situation from those people who only have access to English

language sources which can be characterized as second-hand hearsay.

Especially if people are merely translating from Chinese, I think they

can feel comfortable about publishing their translations fairly soon

in their career, given that someone with more experience is there to

edit and check their translations.

 

For those without such first-hand access, I think one should have at

least five years clinical experience. Even then, clinical experience

alone does not make one an authority about Chinese medicine.

Unfortunately, given the nature of acupuncture, one can be very poorly

educated in CM and still get good enough clinical outcomes to stay in

business for five, 10, or more years. Nevertheless, clinical

experience is a necessary component to really understanding this

medicine. As Farquhar has well pointed out in her book, Knowing

Practice, true knowledge of CM is attained by a combination of

theoretical education plus clinical experience. Either alone are

insufficient.

 

Fine wines, good cheeses, and great steaks are all aged before they're

ready to serve up to consumers. I heartily advise even practitioners

who are or have been professional writers not to engage too soon in

the writing about Chinese medicine for publication. Even five years

make a huge difference in my experience. Now, if Bob Felt would only

let Prince Wen Hui's Cook go out of print, I might be able to sleep

better at night. Let me tell, once you put something in print, it may

be hell to pay to get it back out of print and out of people's minds.

 

Bob

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Bob,

 

Thank you for your thought provoking post.

 

I am one of those members of the profession

who is easily influenced by what I read in

print. And having read what you just wrote,

I feel compelled to respond to a couple of

points.

 

In general, I think your words of caution

and restraint are much needed (if little heeded)

advice for many of us who write about the

subject. I find that notions of freedom and

restraint are among several critical issues

that underlie common misunderstandings on

the part of students of Chinese medicine.

I won't go into that at length, because it

is another subject.

 

But there are a couple of specific things

you said that I want to ask you...and others

about more closely.

 

Ken has touted Unschuld's new book

> as a possible remedy for some of the widely held myths about

Chinese

> medicine. But how where these myths established in the first

place? By

> well intentioned writers who did not truly know what they were

writing

> about.

 

Writers who begin to write when they are

mere novices do take this risk of writing

about things that they do not deeply understand.

But I think when all is said and done, for

a writer there is no way around growing

up in public...other than not to publish.

 

I do not see the issue as " well intentioned "

versus truly knowing what one is writing about.

I see the pivotal issues as pretense. Not

knowing is one thing, and it is an unavoidable

and inescapable consequence of the desire to

learn. In fact, I believe that it is a prerequisite

for a student...or a writer to recognize clearly

the known and the unknown in order to sort data

and information into useful patterns.

 

I trace the deleterious effects of some of

the early texts in the English language on

the subject of Chinese medicine to the pretense

that surrounds the authority of those who

wrote them. Even rank beginners can be honest

about their study, training, and qualifications

if only they desire to be.

 

The profession underwent a protracted period

characterized by people manufacturing extensive

pretexts to serve as authority in a subject

that more or less did not exist in the English

language just a few decades ago. To some extent

the recent threads on this list concerning

the latest in post-nomial nomenclature, to DAOM

or not to DAOM, reflect the enduring influences

of this phase of Chinese medicine's development

and reveal the fact that many remain more concerned

with how they appear than what they truly know.

 

Isn't there a close relationship between the

appearance and meaning of the letters that come

after a professional's name and the literature

(as well as the knowledge that literature constitutes)

that a professional is presumed to have mastered

in order to bear his or her various titles?

 

>

> I very much cop to having made this mistake myself. By attempting

to

> write about Chinese medicine too soon in my career, I am

responsible

> for a number of erroneous notions that come back to haunt me on an

> almost daily basis (since so many of them pop up here on the CHA

> forum). It's like the introduction of a foreign species which then

> becomes a weed that is almost impossible to root out and eradicate

> once it's taken hold.

 

Yes. But it is also one of the mechanisms by which

cross fertilization and hybridization of

ideas takes place, and this is a necessary aspect

of the acculturation of those ideas, along with

with the methods and techniques that they give

rise to. This is bound to happen and probably

must happen if the root is to flourish in new

soil.

 

[...]

 

Even then, clinical experience

> alone does not make one an authority about Chinese medicine.

 

Here, I think you touch on the gist of the

matter. Authority.

 

What consitutues true authority in Chinese

medicine?

 

 

> Unfortunately, given the nature of acupuncture, one can be very

poorly

> educated in CM and still get good enough clinical outcomes to stay

in

> business for five, 10, or more years. Nevertheless, clinical

> experience is a necessary component to really understanding this

> medicine. As Farquhar has well pointed out in her book, Knowing

> Practice, true knowledge of CM is attained by a combination of

> theoretical education plus clinical experience. Either alone are

> insufficient.

 

In reading Unschuld's book, I find myself chewing

on an idea that is closely related to what you've

said here.

 

Is it also necessary for one to have a personal

practice related to the cultivation and care

of qi in order to be well, or let's just say

truly educated in Chinese medicine?

 

 

>

> Fine wines, good cheeses, and great steaks are all aged before

they're

> ready to serve up to consumers. I heartily advise even

practitioners

> who are or have been professional writers not to engage too soon

in

> the writing about Chinese medicine for publication. Even five

years

> make a huge difference in my experience.

 

Even five minutes...or five heartbeats

can change the way I look at things entirely.

 

Again, I would place the emphasis on honesty

and integrity rather than merely on the passage of

time.

 

The market has a perfectly functional remedy

for inferior products. What we need to be

vigilant about is not that young or inexperienced

individuals might produce such products but

that no one be permitted to construct invalid

foundations in order to pretend authority.

 

And when you come right down to it, isn't

this first, last and always simply a matter

of individual integrity?

 

Now, if Bob Felt would only

> let Prince Wen Hui's Cook go out of print, I might be able to

sleep

> better at night. Let me tell, once you put something in print, it

may

> be hell to pay to get it back out of print and out of people's

minds.

>

 

Well, Bob's a merchant, and even his dedication

to the subject is predicated on his having

products to sell. So it seems to me that

the only way to drive one product from the

market is to replace it with a better one

that will make use of the market mechanisms

involved.

 

I don't mean to be giving you a hard time

about any of this. As I said at the top,

I basically agree with what you've said.

 

But as an editor, I find myself constantly

face to face with certain stark facts. And

certain stark fact number one is that there

remains a galling dearth of good writing on the

subject...particularly compared to the

vast extent of the subject itself. So along

with providing other writers with very necessary

cautions about leaping before they look,

I want to encourage people to committ their

thoughts to words and exchange them freely

and openly.

 

Our mutual friend Gerd Ohmstede recently

asked me about what makes this list tick.

And I told him that the number one issue

in my view is Todd's persistence at

maintaining the integrity of the forum

itself. The existence of the forum reflects

people's fundamental need to be able to

forumulate their thoughts in words and

exchange them with one another.

 

As a writer, I always try to bear in mind

when doing my work, that that is really

all there is to it. And to the extent

that this sort of exchange flourishes,

I believe we can contend with the strains

and pressures involved with growing up,

both as individuals and as a profession,

in plain public view.

 

Ken

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Ken,

 

I like your response very much. Perhaps the real issue IS honesty and

disclosure. For sure, everyone makes mistakes and everyone is

constantly growing. Nor would I like to see dissent and discussion

stifled. I do not think CM is a fait accompli but rather a

continuously evolving body of thought and practice.

 

But let me ask you, as editor of a professional journal, don't you (or

your peer review committee) have to sometimes make judgements on

pieces submitted for publication? What if a piece is poorly researched

or poorly thought-out? My guess is that you reject it (with or without

suggestions for improvement).

 

Unfortunately, not all CM publishing venues are peer-reviewed or even

have a mature, professional editor at the helm. And many of those less

professional venues are also crying for anything to publish and fill

their pages. So, caveat emptor? Ultimately, I guess that's what it

comes down to. However, based on my own experience, I would still

counsel young practitioners to think twice before they rush to

publish. One solution is to ask an older, more knowledgeable

practitioner to be one's mentor or unofficial editor. I know I do this

for several younger practitioners.

 

Bob

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In a message dated 6/10/03 9:11:46 PM, marnae writes:

 

 

<<Fine wines, good cheeses, and great steaks are all aged before they're

ready to serve up to consumers. I heartily advise even practitioners

who are or have been professional writers not to engage too soon in

the writing about Chinese medicine for publication.>>

 

 

I think it is also important to confirm that even what the best intentioned neutral interpreter or philosopher says is slanted by the filters of that persons life, and that ones clinical experience is the same. All we can do is our best to get our patients on the road to wellness and the best way we can find is one where we don't believe, like Crazy Miranda (and old Jef Airplane number), in everything we read until we see it and it makes sense from our personal experience.

 

<<I hope that at some point our schools mature to the point where the process of working with individual students and the time that that requires is recognized as a value to the institution and is recompensed appropriately.  Otherwise, those of us who do it anyway start to get burned out.>>

 

I also think it is time we started to move away from being vocational schools and into being colleges of higher learning. I tend to be on the more political front, although I, like most fools, try to keep my fingers in many pies. One of the problems I see is that many of the OM compatriots in our field are not very literate nor conversant when it comes time to blend with politicans and other actors who are somewhat educated. Indeed, they do not seem to see a need to advance our profession politically as well as academically, if at all beecause they are "not political". This foolish "head in the sand" attitude may be our undoing as we lose ground in many states and don't advance in others because of an absence of people who look to the future in our chosen profession.

Just an opinion, but one that needs to be expressed, especially among herbalists.

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Again, well put Bob!!

marnae

At 04:38 PM 6/10/2003 +0000, you wrote:

While I appreciate some

people's heart-felt desire to spread the " good

news " of acupuncture and Chinese medicine, having made the mistake

 

myself of writing and publishing about Chinese medicine too soon in

my career and education, I can tell you how deleterious it is to the

 

profession to prematurely attempt to write (either for the profession

 

or for the public). Because the profession as whole has a less than

scholarly relationship with reading, writing, and words in general,

many members of the profession are easily influenced by things they

see in print, even those things meant for lay readers. When a person

 

writes before their " wine has matured, " they may be putting

into print

erroneous ideas that then become rooted in the " common wisdom "

of

patients and practitioners alike. Ken has touted Unschuld's new book

 

as a possible remedy for some of the widely held myths about Chinese

 

medicine. But how where these myths established in the first place? By

 

well intentioned writers who did not truly know what they were writing

 

about.

I very much cop to having made this mistake myself. By attempting to

 

write about Chinese medicine too soon in my career, I am responsible

 

for a number of erroneous notions that come back to haunt me on an

almost daily basis (since so many of them pop up here on the CHA

forum). It's like the introduction of a foreign species which then

becomes a weed that is almost impossible to root out and eradicate

once it's taken hold.

Many years ago, I was taught that the benefit of a teacher is to teach

 

you how not to make the same mistakes others have made before. The

teacher is supposed to be a guide who has traveled the path ahead of

 

you and knows from first-hand experience the wrong turns and pit-falls

 

up ahead. Having made this mistake myself and learned through hard

experience, I sincerely caution other young practitioners not to

attempt to write about Chinese medicine for publication too soon. Not

 

only will it cause you grief personally, it may have deleterious

effects on the very profession you are attempting to serve.

So then, the question is how soon is too soon, and that's a hard

question to answer. It depends in part on how good your source

materials are. Those people who have direct and immediate access (via

 

reading Chinese) to the whole Chinese medical literature are in a very

 

different situation from those people who only have access to English

 

language sources which can be characterized as second-hand hearsay.

Especially if people are merely translating from Chinese, I think they

 

can feel comfortable about publishing their translations fairly soon

 

in their career, given that someone with more experience is there to

 

edit and check their translations.

For those without such first-hand access, I think one should have at

 

least five years clinical experience. Even then, clinical experience

 

alone does not make one an authority about Chinese medicine.

Unfortunately, given the nature of acupuncture, one can be very poorly

 

educated in CM and still get good enough clinical outcomes to stay in

 

business for five, 10, or more years. Nevertheless, clinical

experience is a necessary component to really understanding this

medicine. As Farquhar has well pointed out in her book, Knowing

Practice, true knowledge of CM is attained by a combination of

theoretical education plus clinical experience. Either alone are

insufficient.

Fine wines, good cheeses, and great steaks are all aged before they're

 

ready to serve up to consumers. I heartily advise even practitioners

 

who are or have been professional writers not to engage too soon in

the writing about Chinese medicine for publication. Even five years

make a huge difference in my experience. Now, if Bob Felt would only

 

let Prince Wen Hui's Cook go out of print, I might be able to sleep

better at night. Let me tell, once you put something in print, it may

 

be hell to pay to get it back out of print and out of people's

minds.

Bob

 

 

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Ken, Bob etc.

Like Ken, I agree with most of Bob's recent post. However, as

you say, there is a dearth of writing in this field. Unfortunately,

I believe that the reason for this goes back to the schools, again!

 

I recently (no longer) worked at a school that had a Master's thesis

requirement. There were several problems with the requirement:

 

First, the school did not support the faculty in giving guidance to the

students nor did the school support the process of learning to

write. At traditional academic institutions, one part of a

full-time faculty load is being a thesis advisor - in exchange, faculty

teach one or two classes per term. At most of our schools, if there

are full-time faculty, they teach 3 - 5 classes per term, have an

administrative responsibility and are also expected to mentor

students. This ends up being an almost impossible task. And

so, unfortunatly, the mentoring of individual student work often gets put

to the side. As a full-time faculty who had some writing experience

and an advanced degree from a traditional academic institution, I found

myself mentoring between 6 - 10 students per semester. Because the

program did not support the thesis process for the students, many of them

had never even written a 10 page research paper, much less a 30 - 50 page

thesis (and these were not clinically based but literature based).

I often spent more of my time simply correcting spelling and grammatical

problems than I did working with the content of the thesis.

 

From my perspective, a Master's thesis should generate several

publishable articles. Very few of the theses that I read were up to

the standard of publication and, again, because the school did not

support the process I was unable to give the time to the students to help

them to achieve that - and so, the theses sit in the school library and

never get looked at or worked on again.

I relate this experience because it is a problem for this field.

Our students are not trained to write well and as a result, do not write

after completing their education. I recently had a conversation

with a colleague who actually did write a good thesis and suggested to

her that she consider publication. She was shocked that this might even

be a possibility. The sense that we are training clinicians only

seems to pervade our profession when in fact we should be training

individuals who are clinicians but who also can think and reason and

write and express themselves in public. It takes a certain amount

of ego to be willing to put yourself out there in a publication and to

deal with the critique that comes from that. Here we are back to

authority and ownership - many of our students and professionals do not

feel a sense of ownership of their medicine and so do not write. In

traditional academia and in medicine, writing is how we communicate what

we are doing with our colleagues - it is a conversation over many years

that allows the participants to grow from the critiques and to mature

their ideas. I believe that as educators we need to help our

students to develop this way of thinking rather than being afraid to say

something publicly. I am always encouraging students to read and

write - papers, case studies, theoretical treatises, just random

thoughts. I hope that at some point our schools mature to the point

where the process of working with individual students and the time that

that requires is recognized as a value to the institution and is

recompensed appropriately. Otherwise, those of us who do it anyway

start to get burned out.

Marnae

At 09:31 PM 6/10/2003 +0000, you wrote:

Bob,

Thank you for your thought provoking post.

I am one of those members of the profession

who is easily influenced by what I read in

print. And having read what you just wrote,

I feel compelled to respond to a couple of

points.

In general, I think your words of caution

and restraint are much needed (if little heeded)

advice for many of us who write about the

subject. I find that notions of freedom and

restraint are among several critical issues

that underlie common misunderstandings on

the part of students of Chinese medicine.

I won't go into that at length, because it

is another subject.

But there are a couple of specific things

you said that I want to ask you...and others

about more closely.

Ken has touted Unschuld's new book

> as a possible remedy for some of the widely held myths about

Chinese

> medicine. But how where these myths established in the first

place? By

> well intentioned writers who did not truly know what they were

writing

> about.

Writers who begin to write when they are

mere novices do take this risk of writing

about things that they do not deeply understand.

But I think when all is said and done, for

a writer there is no way around growing

up in public...other than not to publish.

I do not see the issue as " well intentioned "

versus truly knowing what one is writing about.

I see the pivotal issues as pretense. Not

knowing is one thing, and it is an unavoidable

and inescapable consequence of the desire to

learn. In fact, I believe that it is a prerequisite

for a student...or a writer to recognize clearly

the known and the unknown in order to sort data

and information into useful patterns.

I trace the deleterious effects of some of

the early texts in the English language on

the subject of Chinese medicine to the pretense

that surrounds the authority of those who

wrote them. Even rank beginners can be honest

about their study, training, and qualifications

if only they desire to be.

The profession underwent a protracted period

characterized by people manufacturing extensive

pretexts to serve as authority in a subject

that more or less did not exist in the English

language just a few decades ago. To some extent

the recent threads on this list concerning

the latest in post-nomial nomenclature, to DAOM

or not to DAOM, reflect the enduring influences

of this phase of Chinese medicine's development

and reveal the fact that many remain more concerned

with how they appear than what they truly know.

Isn't there a close relationship between the

appearance and meaning of the letters that come

after a professional's name and the literature

(as well as the knowledge that literature constitutes)

that a professional is presumed to have mastered

in order to bear his or her various titles?

>

> I very much cop to having made this mistake myself. By attempting

 

to

> write about Chinese medicine too soon in my career, I am

responsible

> for a number of erroneous notions that come back to haunt me on an

 

> almost daily basis (since so many of them pop up here on the CHA

 

> forum). It's like the introduction of a foreign species which then

 

> becomes a weed that is almost impossible to root out and eradicate

 

> once it's taken hold.

Yes. But it is also one of the mechanisms by which

cross fertilization and hybridization of

ideas takes place, and this is a necessary aspect

of the acculturation of those ideas, along with

with the methods and techniques that they give

rise to. This is bound to happen and probably

must happen if the root is to flourish in new

soil.

[...]

Even then, clinical experience

> alone does not make one an authority about Chinese medicine.

 

Here, I think you touch on the gist of the

matter. Authority.

What consitutues true authority in Chinese

medicine?

 

> Unfortunately, given the nature of acupuncture, one can be very

 

poorly

> educated in CM and still get good enough clinical outcomes to stay

 

in

> business for five, 10, or more years. Nevertheless, clinical

> experience is a necessary component to really understanding this

 

> medicine. As Farquhar has well pointed out in her book, Knowing

 

> Practice, true knowledge of CM is attained by a combination of

> theoretical education plus clinical experience. Either alone are

 

> insufficient.

In reading Unschuld's book, I find myself chewing

on an idea that is closely related to what you've

said here.

Is it also necessary for one to have a personal

practice related to the cultivation and care

of qi in order to be well, or let's just say

truly educated in Chinese medicine?

 

>

> Fine wines, good cheeses, and great steaks are all aged before

they're

> ready to serve up to consumers. I heartily advise even

practitioners

> who are or have been professional writers not to engage too soon

 

in

> the writing about Chinese medicine for publication. Even five

years

> make a huge difference in my experience.

Even five minutes...or five heartbeats

can change the way I look at things entirely.

Again, I would place the emphasis on honesty

and integrity rather than merely on the passage of

time.

The market has a perfectly functional remedy

for inferior products. What we need to be

vigilant about is not that young or inexperienced

individuals might produce such products but

that no one be permitted to construct invalid

foundations in order to pretend authority.

And when you come right down to it, isn't

this first, last and always simply a matter

of individual integrity?

Now, if Bob Felt would only

> let Prince Wen Hui's Cook go out of print, I might be able to

sleep

> better at night. Let me tell, once you put something in print, it

 

may

> be hell to pay to get it back out of print and out of people's

minds.

>

Well, Bob's a merchant, and even his dedication

to the subject is predicated on his having

products to sell. So it seems to me that

the only way to drive one product from the

market is to replace it with a better one

that will make use of the market mechanisms

involved.

I don't mean to be giving you a hard time

about any of this. As I said at the top,

I basically agree with what you've said.

But as an editor, I find myself constantly

face to face with certain stark facts. And

certain stark fact number one is that there

remains a galling dearth of good writing on the

subject...particularly compared to the

vast extent of the subject itself. So along

with providing other writers with very necessary

cautions about leaping before they look,

I want to encourage people to committ their

thoughts to words and exchange them freely

and openly.

Our mutual friend Gerd Ohmstede recently

asked me about what makes this list tick.

And I told him that the number one issue

in my view is Todd's persistence at

maintaining the integrity of the forum

itself. The existence of the forum reflects

people's fundamental need to be able to

forumulate their thoughts in words and

exchange them with one another.

As a writer, I always try to bear in mind

when doing my work, that that is really

all there is to it. And to the extent

that this sort of exchange flourishes,

I believe we can contend with the strains

and pressures involved with growing up,

both as individuals and as a profession,

in plain public view.

Ken

 

 

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, acuman1@a... wrote:

One of the problems I see is that many of the OM compatriots in our

field are not very literate nor conversant when it comes time to

blend with politicans and other actors who are somewhat educated.

Indeed, they do not seem to see a need to advance our profession

politically as well as academically, if at all beecause they

are " not political " . This foolish " head in the sand " attitude may be

our undoing as we lose ground in many states and don't advance in

others because of an absence of people who look to the future in our

chosen profession. >>>

 

 

David:

 

Is there a forum like this one to promote discussion, activism, and

keep people up-to-date on the political goings on?

 

 

Jim Ramholz

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Bob,

 

, " Bob Flaws "

<pemachophel2001> wrote:

> Ken,

>

> I like your response very much.

 

Darn. I hope we don't give anyone the impression

that we agree...about anything...

 

Perhaps the real issue IS honesty and

> disclosure. For sure, everyone makes mistakes and everyone is

> constantly growing. Nor would I like to see dissent and discussion

> stifled. I do not think CM is a fait accompli but rather a

> continuously evolving body of thought and practice.

 

I heard someone once describe Stanley Kubrick's

desk as a small black hole, and that is more

or less how I think of Chinese medicine. A singular

confusion made up of a vast complexity of ponderous

objects, which can fit in a relatively small building...

 

....at least to house the documentation for the software that

runs the " system " we call Chinese medicine.

 

I would certainly never want to see dissent and

discussion stifled in any slightest way. As I've

said before, the opposition of ideas is not just

mandatory for the healthy growth and development

of the subject, it is true friendship.

 

 

 

 

 

 

>

> But let me ask you, as editor of a professional journal, don't you

(or

> your peer review committee) have to sometimes make judgements on

> pieces submitted for publication? What if a piece is poorly

researched

> or poorly thought-out? My guess is that you reject it (with or

without

> suggestions for improvement).

 

Cai dui le!

 

The rejection pile ought to be a measure

of the depth of writing. Ours is not deep

enough. The way to ensure great writing...

to whatever extent is can be ensured...

is to encourage massive amounts of production

on the part of those with the need to create

it and then whittle away everything that

doesn't fit the standards. At CAOM we have

concerned ourselves for nearly three years

now with discussion of the whole standards

process. Where do they come from? How do

they fit and function in the process of

designing good trials and the preparation

and publication of reports to the profession

on such research?

 

Steve Birch has done considerable work towards

developing definitions of such terms as " traditional "

" traditional medicine " etc., which turn out to be

enormously important when it comes to establishing

real standards that people will actually use.

 

And one of the key actions related to standards

is measuring work done and rejecting that which

simply does not measure up.

 

It's inherenly elitist work and goes against

the grain of the ethos of the counter culture,

which is based on the idea that hard work is

inimical to happiness. Which is to say that

such work is thankless and not very popular.

 

 

>

> Unfortunately, not all CM publishing venues are peer-reviewed or

even

> have a mature, professional editor at the helm. And many of those

less

> professional venues are also crying for anything to publish and

fill

> their pages. So, caveat emptor?

 

Ultimately it's caveat emptor, no matter

who is reviewing what. The ultimate responsibility

for what we put in our minds remains with

each of us individually.

 

Ultimately, I guess that's what it

> comes down to. However, based on my own experience, I would still

> counsel young practitioners to think twice before they rush to

> publish. One solution is to ask an older, more knowledgeable

> practitioner to be one's mentor or unofficial editor. I know I do

this

> for several younger practitioners.

 

Again, I have no quarrel with such counsel

and strongly encourage others accordingly.

In fact, anyone who has ever asked me for

such help knows that I am always willing

to give it.

 

For myself, I find little of greater value

as a writer than someone who is willing to

deconstruct or at least tear apart something

I have written. So I try to give as much of

this sort of thing as I can as a way of

making deposits in my karmic account.

 

Ken

>

> Bob

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>

> Is there a forum like this one to promote discussion, activism,

and

> keep people up-to-date on the political goings on?

>

 

The media in general exist for just such

a purpose. It is remarkably easy to gain

access to even the most mainstream media.

Having something coherent to say is far

more difficult.

 

Ken

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wrote:

> Bob,

>

> , " Bob Flaws "

> <pemachophel2001> wrote:

> > Ken,

> >

> > I like your response very much.

>

> Darn. I hope we don't give anyone the impression

> that we agree...about anything..

 

yeah. its pretty scary. :-)

 

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In a message dated 6/11/03 2:59:07 AM, jramholz writes:

 

 

, acuman1@a... wrote:

One of the problems I see is that many of the OM compatriots in our

field are not very literate nor conversant when it comes time to

blend with politicans and other actors who are somewhat educated.

Indeed, they do not seem to see a need to advance our profession

politically as well as academically, if at all beecause they

are "not political". This foolish "head in the sand" attitude may be

our undoing as we lose ground in many states and don't advance in

others because of an absence of people who look to the future in our

chosen profession. >>>

 

 

David:

 

Is there a forum like this one to promote discussion, activism, and

keep people up-to-date on the political goings on?

 

 

Jim Ramholz

 

 

When the whole is removed from the parts, neither survives or prospers. This is a discussion about academia, and it is my posit that when deciding educational values and the relative lack of a rounded education within our profession, politics is indeed involved. I suspect any ancient Chinese scholar would agree with that since history, art, music, literature, and medicine are intertwined in education. I read this forum regularly, and do not insert my views on politics, or other things, where they are not indicated. However, taken in the discussion here about the doctoral level of education and comparing i it to todays master's, with all of its implications, the part of my post that relates to politics is indeed indicated. The essence of my point is that the same absence of a complete education that leads to poor writing skills also leads to poor political understanding, interest, and capability.

 

That said, I will not darken the door of this discussion further with the reality that politics may indeed play at least a part in the future of our field as might poor writing, but that reality may not be what you are interested in including in the discussion, despite history. I can live with that.

 

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Marnae,

 

I agree about the lack of true support for Masters level

academics at many (if not most) of our schools. I question

whether a good percentage of our teachers could even produce a

real Masters thesis.

 

Isn't a large part of this problem also that the schools do not limit

their enrollment to truly Masters quality students? In my experience

teaching around the U.S., approximately half of the student body is

made up of people who probably should not try to be more than massage

therapists as opposed to doctors of CM.

 

Bob

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, " dragon90405 " wrote:

> The media in general exist for just such

> a purpose. It is remarkably easy to gain

> access to even the most mainstream media.

> Having something coherent to say is far

> more difficult. >>>

 

Ken:

 

Perhaps I should have made myself more clear. I was wondering about

forums of the national organizations and their activities; that's

why I was addressing it to David.

 

 

Jim Ramholz

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Jim,

>

> Perhaps I should have made myself more clear. I was wondering

about

> forums of the national organizations and their activities; that's

> why I was addressing it to David.

>

 

You were already clear. The point I was making

was just that if anyone wants to take the

discussion of issues relating to the public

to the public media, it is a relatively

easy task. In fact, I think that the public

is quite interested in many of these issues

and that media outlets are hungry for such

content. So what I meant to say is that

the " forum " exists.

 

Ken

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Again, I have to agree as well (yikes). Many (if not most) of

the students in these programs meet only the minimal requirements of

2years of college and have never written a paper or read a paper

critically before. This is very unfortunate, but, as we are market

driven, for the time being we work around these minimal standards.

Writing is one of those areas that so far has also been ignored in the

doctoral programs. Because they are " clinical doctorates "

there is not necessarily a final written piece - again we are producing

clinicians who cannot write about what they do. This is very

unfortunate and a reason to think about a Ph.D in the field as another,

entirely different degree.

Marnae

At 02:45 PM 6/11/2003 +0000, you wrote:

Marnae,

I agree about the lack of true support for Masters level

academics at many (if not most) of our schools. I question

whether a good percentage of our teachers could even produce a

real Masters thesis.

Isn't a large part of this problem also that the schools do not limit

 

their enrollment to truly Masters quality students? In my experience

 

teaching around the U.S., approximately half of the student body is

made up of people who probably should not try to be more than massage

 

therapists as opposed to doctors of CM.

Bob

 

 

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Marnae, Bob, and all,

 

 

> Again, I have to agree as well (yikes). Many (if not most) of

the

> students in these programs meet only the minimal requirements of

2years of

> college and have never written a paper or read a paper critically

> before. This is very unfortunate, but, as we are market driven,

for the

> time being we work around these minimal standards. Writing is one

of those

> areas that so far has also been ignored in the doctoral programs.

Because

> they are " clinical doctorates " there is not necessarily a final

written

> piece - again we are producing clinicians who cannot write about

what they

> do. This is very unfortunate and a reason to think about a Ph.D

in the

> field as another, entirely different degree.

>

Accepting the point that's been made here

that the prerequisites are lacking, wouldn't

it make sense to focus the discussion on

programs to get the missing basics in

as a forestep to designing additional

advanced degrees?

 

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Accepting the point that's been

made here

that the prerequisites are lacking, wouldn't

it make sense to focus the discussion on

programs to get the missing basics in

as a forestep to designing additional

advanced degrees?

Agreed - and this is something that some of the programs are working on -

we start students writing from their first theory course and it continues

every semester. Research papers, case studies, opinion pieces

etc. But, because of the nature of the clinical doctorate, if they

really want to continue in a more academic path, there is no place to go

for a higher degree. The DAOM is not an academic degree, language

study is not a requirement, writing is not a requirement etc. In

traditional academe, we learn to write, critique and teach as we get our

degree - that is a part of the degree process. Obviously to get

into these programs one must already be able to write to a certain level,

but the transition that occurs between undergraduate and graduate level

writing is quite remarkable. In a sense, our Master's programs

often need to remediate poor high school and college training but then

there is little place to go with it except into the clinical

doctorate. So, again, we are creating " doctors " out of

clinicians who cannot write but we have little room for academics who are

also clinicians.

marnae

At 01:42 AM 6/12/2003 +0000, you wrote:

Marnae, Bob, and all,

 

> Again, I have to agree as well (yikes). Many (if not

most) of

the

> students in these programs meet only the minimal requirements of

 

2years of

> college and have never written a paper or read a paper critically

 

> before. This is very unfortunate, but, as we are market

driven,

for the

> time being we work around these minimal standards. Writing is

one

of those

> areas that so far has also been ignored in the doctoral

programs.

Because

> they are " clinical doctorates " there is not necessarily a

final

written

> piece - again we are producing clinicians who cannot write about

 

what they

> do. This is very unfortunate and a reason to think about a

Ph.D

in the

> field as another, entirely different degree.

>

Ken

 

 

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In looking at a PA Medical board agenda, it looks as if we are not the only ones discussing educaton and professionalism amongst our fellows.

 

REPORT OF COMMITTEE ON MEDICAL EDUCATION

(Daniel B. Kimball, Jr., M.D.)

 

1) Embedding Professionalism in Medical Education………………………………342

 

 

(Kimball, by the way, was the main author for the medical board federation's guide for alternative medicine practices.)

 

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In a message dated 6/11/03 9:36:20 PM, marnae writes:

 

 

Because they are "clinical doctorates" there is not necessarily a final written piece - again we are producing clinicians who cannot write about what they do.  This is very unfortunate and a reason to think about a Ph.D in the field as another, entirely different degree.

 

Marnae

 

 

While I see many MD's with poor writing skills and consider clinical and writing (not reading) skills different, I must admit that we do need PhD's in OM and look forward to that being the next hurdle after th eoriginal clinical doctorate, which we should have had years ago and be building upon (like other medical professions have) instead of building up to it in such a haphazard fashion.

David

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