Guest guest Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 I think i wanna write a story its in the beginning stages I have a plot but not the details like their ages should it take place in hollywood? no. I need a setting more green I know! Pensylvannia and the year is 1813 A grand house. or Poverty? yes. Little money if not any. I see four chairs, no, three that's one too many. Love of course and Heartbreak and yet again they call each other pet and how should it end? and when? a page turner! a cliffhanger? a book with rave reviews I'll be famous I'll be all over the news now I must review, rewrite, reveal this manuscript needs a lot of work to make my dream turn real -anouk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 You have a way with words Anouk. :-) Jo , " flower child " <zurumato wrote: > > I think i wanna write a story > > its in the beginning stages > I have a plot > but not the details like their ages > > should it take place in hollywood? > no. I need a setting more green > I know! Pensylvannia > and the year is 1813 > > A grand house. or Poverty? > yes. Little money if not any. > I see four chairs, no, three > that's one too many. > > Love of course and Heartbreak and yet > again they call each other pet > > and how should it end? > and when? > > a page turner! a cliffhanger? > a book with rave reviews > I'll be famous > I'll be all over the news > > now I must review, rewrite, reveal > this manuscript needs a lot of work > to make my dream turn real > > > -anouk > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 Hi Anouk, What on earth are you going on about?, have you been eating the wrong kind of mushrooms? Seriously though if you did write one, Iwould read it. Maybe Fraggle could offer advice on publishing etc? The Valley Vegan...........flower child <zurumato wrote: I think i wanna write a storyits in the beginning stagesI have a plotbut not the details like their agesshould it take place in hollywood?no. I need a setting more greenI know! Pensylvanniaand the year is 1813A grand house. or Poverty? yes. Little money if not any.I see four chairs, no, three that's one too many. Love of course and Heartbreak and yetagain they call each other petand how should it end? and when?a page turner! a cliffhanger? a book with rave reviews I'll be famousI'll be all over the newsnow I must review, rewrite, revealthis manuscript needs a lot of workto make my dream turn real-anouk Peter H Try the all-new Mail . "The New Version is radically easier to use" – The Wall Street Journal Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 thanks jo, i wrote that last night for my eight year old is into poetry at school. sometimes I wonder if poetry is in need of revival like opera the massess shall speak on this. , " heartwerk " <jo.heartwork wrote: > > You have a way with words Anouk. :-) > > Jo > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 i wish we still had our stories peter blast it all................ >flower child <zurumato >Jan 7, 2007 8:58 PM > > about a little girl thinking out loud on the process of writing a book > >I think i wanna write a story > > What gets us into trouble is not what we don't know, it's what we know for sure that just ain't so. - Mark Twain Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 I`d settle for some memories............ The Valley Vegan............fraggle <EBbrewpunx wrote: i wish we still had our stories peterblast it all................>flower child <zurumato (AT) earthlink (DOT) net>>Jan 7, 2007 8:58 PM> > about a little girl thinking out loud on the process of writing a book>>I think i wanna write a story>>What gets us into trouble is not what we don't know, it's what we know for sure that just ain't so.- Mark TwainPeter H Send instant messages to your online friends http://uk.messenger. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 hi peter, it is suppose to be a little boy or girl thinking out loud on how to write a book I was trying to make things rhyme, so it is kinda silly. and it is published. on VEGAN CHAT!! , peter VV <swpgh01 wrote: > > Hi Anouk, > What on earth are you going on about?, have you been eating the wrong kind of mushrooms? > Seriously though if you did write one, Iwould read it. Maybe Fraggle could offer advice on publishing etc? > > The Valley Vegan........... > > flower child <zurumato wrote: > I think i wanna write a story > > its in the beginning stages > I have a plot > but not the details like their ages > > should it take place in hollywood? > no. I need a setting more green > I know! Pensylvannia > and the year is 1813 > > A grand house. or Poverty? > yes. Little money if not any. > I see four chairs, no, three > that's one too many. > > Love of course and Heartbreak and yet > again they call each other pet > > and how should it end? > and when? > > a page turner! a cliffhanger? > a book with rave reviews > I'll be famous > I'll be all over the news > > now I must review, rewrite, reveal > this manuscript needs a lot of work > to make my dream turn real > > -anouk Peter H > > > > > Try the all-new Mail . " The New Version is radically easier to use " – The Wall Street Journal > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 you can borrow some of my bad ones if you like... i've got plenty to spare peter VV Jan 8, 2007 12:39 PM Re: about a little girl thinking out loud on the process of writing a book I`d settle for some memories............ The Valley Vegan............fraggle <EBbrewpunx wrote: i wish we still had our stories peterblast it all................>flower child <zurumato (AT) earthlink (DOT) net>>Jan 7, 2007 8:58 PM> > about a little girl thinking out loud on the process of writing a book>>I think i wanna write a story>>What gets us into trouble is not what we don't know, it's what we know for sure that just ain't so.- Mark Twain Peter H Send instant messages to your online friends http://uk.messenger. What gets us into trouble is not what we don't know, it's what we know for sure that just ain't so. - Mark Twain Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 Hi Fraggle > i wish we still had our stories peter > blast it all................ I've still got most of the main plot line and twists in my head. I guess I should get round to putting it into something other than my head at some point.... BB Peteer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 8, 2007 Report Share Posted January 8, 2007 Hi Anouk > sometimes I wonder if poetry is in need of revival > like opera > the massess shall speak on this. I think the main problem is that most of the " poetry " people are brought up with nowadays are song lyrics... and (at least in the UK), the sort of songs that get played to the masses don't tend to contain great poetry.... BB Peter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 9, 2007 Report Share Posted January 9, 2007 It's a poem Peter. Jo - peter VV Monday, January 08, 2007 6:36 PM Re: about a little girl thinking out loud on the process of writing a book Hi Anouk, What on earth are you going on about?, have you been eating the wrong kind of mushrooms? Seriously though if you did write one, Iwould read it. Maybe Fraggle could offer advice on publishing etc? The Valley Vegan...........flower child <zurumato wrote: I think i wanna write a storyits in the beginning stagesI have a plotbut not the details like their agesshould it take place in hollywood?no. I need a setting more greenI know! Pensylvanniaand the year is 1813A grand house. or Poverty? yes. Little money if not any.I see four chairs, no, three that's one too many. Love of course and Heartbreak and yetagain they call each other petand how should it end? and when?a page turner! a cliffhanger? a book with rave reviews I'll be famousI'll be all over the newsnow I must review, rewrite, revealthis manuscript needs a lot of workto make my dream turn real-anouk Peter H Try the all-new Mail . "The New Version is radically easier to use" – The Wall Street Journal Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 9, 2007 Report Share Posted January 9, 2007 Hi Anouk I enjoyed your poem - it was not lost on me :-) Jo , " flower child " <zurumato wrote: > > hi peter, > > it is suppose to be a little boy or girl > thinking out loud on how to write a book > I was trying to make things rhyme, so it is kinda silly. > > and it is published. > on VEGAN CHAT!! > > > , peter VV <swpgh01@> wrote: > > > > Hi Anouk, > > What on earth are you going on about?, have you been eating the > wrong kind of mushrooms? > > Seriously though if you did write one, Iwould read it. Maybe > Fraggle could offer advice on publishing etc? > > > > The Valley Vegan........... > > > > flower child <zurumato@> wrote: > > I think i wanna write a story > > > > its in the beginning stages > > I have a plot > > but not the details like their ages > > > > should it take place in hollywood? > > no. I need a setting more green > > I know! Pensylvannia > > and the year is 1813 > > > > A grand house. or Poverty? > > yes. Little money if not any. > > I see four chairs, no, three > > that's one too many. > > > > Love of course and Heartbreak and yet > > again they call each other pet > > > > and how should it end? > > and when? > > > > a page turner! a cliffhanger? > > a book with rave reviews > > I'll be famous > > I'll be all over the news > > > > now I must review, rewrite, reveal > > this manuscript needs a lot of work > > to make my dream turn real > > > > -anouk > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Peter H > > > > > > > > > > Try the all-new Mail . " The New Version is radically easier > to use " – The Wall Street Journal > > > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 9, 2007 Report Share Posted January 9, 2007 Sorry, I am tooooo stooooopid sometimes......... The Valley Vegan.............heartwerk <jo.heartwork wrote: Hi AnoukI enjoyed your poem - it was not lost on me :-)Jo , "flower child" <zurumato wrote:>> hi peter, > > it is suppose to be a little boy or girl > thinking out loud on how to write a book> I was trying to make things rhyme, so it is kinda silly.> > and it is published.> on VEGAN CHAT!!> > > , peter VV <swpgh01@> wrote:> >> > Hi Anouk,> > What on earth are you going on about?, have you been eating the> wrong kind of mushrooms?> > Seriously though if you did write one, Iwould read it. Maybe> Fraggle could offer advice on publishing etc?> > > > The Valley Vegan...........> > > > flower child <zurumato@> wrote:> > I think i wanna write a story> > > > its in the beginning stages> > I have a plot> > but not the details like their ages> > > > should it take place in hollywood?> > no. I need a setting more green> > I know! Pensylvannia> > and the year is 1813> > > > A grand house. or Poverty? > > yes. Little money if not any.> > I see four chairs, no, three > > that's one too many. > > > > Love of course and Heartbreak and yet> > again they call each other pet> > > > and how should it end? > > and when?> > > > a page turner! a cliffhanger? > > a book with rave reviews > > I'll be famous> > I'll be all over the news> > > > now I must review, rewrite, reveal> > this manuscript needs a lot of work> > to make my dream turn real> > > > -anouk > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Peter H > > > > > > > > > > Try the all-new Mail . "The New Version is radically easier> to use" – The Wall Street Journal> >>Peter H All new Mail "The new Interface is stunning in its simplicity and ease of use." - PC Magazine Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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