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I think i wanna write a story

 

its in the beginning stages

I have a plot

but not the details like their ages

 

should it take place in hollywood?

no. I need a setting more green

I know! Pensylvannia

and the year is 1813

 

A grand house. or Poverty?

yes. Little money if not any.

I see four chairs, no, three

that's one too many.

 

Love of course and Heartbreak and yet

again they call each other pet

 

and how should it end?

and when?

 

a page turner! a cliffhanger?

a book with rave reviews

I'll be famous

I'll be all over the news

 

now I must review, rewrite, reveal

this manuscript needs a lot of work

to make my dream turn real

 

 

-anouk

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You have a way with words Anouk. :-)

 

Jo

 

, " flower child " <zurumato

wrote:

>

> I think i wanna write a story

>

> its in the beginning stages

> I have a plot

> but not the details like their ages

>

> should it take place in hollywood?

> no. I need a setting more green

> I know! Pensylvannia

> and the year is 1813

>

> A grand house. or Poverty?

> yes. Little money if not any.

> I see four chairs, no, three

> that's one too many.

>

> Love of course and Heartbreak and yet

> again they call each other pet

>

> and how should it end?

> and when?

>

> a page turner! a cliffhanger?

> a book with rave reviews

> I'll be famous

> I'll be all over the news

>

> now I must review, rewrite, reveal

> this manuscript needs a lot of work

> to make my dream turn real

>

>

> -anouk

>

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Hi Anouk, What on earth are you going on about?, have you been eating the wrong kind of mushrooms? Seriously though if you did write one, Iwould read it. Maybe Fraggle could offer advice on publishing etc? The Valley Vegan...........flower child <zurumato wrote: I think i wanna write a storyits in the beginning stagesI have a plotbut not the details like their agesshould it take place in hollywood?no. I need a setting

more greenI know! Pensylvanniaand the year is 1813A grand house. or Poverty? yes. Little money if not any.I see four chairs, no, three that's one too many. Love of course and Heartbreak and yetagain they call each other petand how should it end? and when?a page turner! a cliffhanger? a book with rave reviews I'll be famousI'll be all over the newsnow I must review, rewrite, revealthis manuscript needs a lot of workto make my dream turn real-anouk Peter H

 

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thanks jo,

 

i wrote that last night for my eight year

old is into poetry at school.

 

sometimes I wonder if poetry is in need of revival

like opera

the massess shall speak on this.

 

 

, " heartwerk " <jo.heartwork wrote:

>

> You have a way with words Anouk. :-)

>

> Jo

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i wish we still had our stories peter

blast it all................

 

 

>flower child <zurumato

>Jan 7, 2007 8:58 PM

>

> about a little girl thinking out loud on the process of

writing a book

>

>I think i wanna write a story

>

>

 

What gets us into trouble is not what we don't know, it's what we know for sure

that just ain't so.

- Mark Twain

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I`d settle for some memories............ The Valley Vegan............fraggle <EBbrewpunx wrote: i wish we still had our stories peterblast it all................>flower child <zurumato (AT) earthlink (DOT) net>>Jan 7, 2007 8:58 PM> > about a

little girl thinking out loud on the process of writing a book>>I think i wanna write a story>>What gets us into trouble is not what we don't know, it's what we know for sure that just ain't so.- Mark TwainPeter H

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hi peter,

 

it is suppose to be a little boy or girl

thinking out loud on how to write a book

I was trying to make things rhyme, so it is kinda silly.

 

and it is published.

on VEGAN CHAT!!

 

 

, peter VV <swpgh01 wrote:

>

> Hi Anouk,

> What on earth are you going on about?, have you been eating the

wrong kind of mushrooms?

> Seriously though if you did write one, Iwould read it. Maybe

Fraggle could offer advice on publishing etc?

>

> The Valley Vegan...........

>

> flower child <zurumato wrote:

> I think i wanna write a story

>

> its in the beginning stages

> I have a plot

> but not the details like their ages

>

> should it take place in hollywood?

> no. I need a setting more green

> I know! Pensylvannia

> and the year is 1813

>

> A grand house. or Poverty?

> yes. Little money if not any.

> I see four chairs, no, three

> that's one too many.

>

> Love of course and Heartbreak and yet

> again they call each other pet

>

> and how should it end?

> and when?

>

> a page turner! a cliffhanger?

> a book with rave reviews

> I'll be famous

> I'll be all over the news

>

> now I must review, rewrite, reveal

> this manuscript needs a lot of work

> to make my dream turn real

>

> -anouk

Peter H

>

>

>

>

> Try the all-new Mail . " The New Version is radically easier

to use " – The Wall Street Journal

>

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you can borrow some of my bad ones if you like...

i've got plenty to spare

:)

peter VV Jan 8, 2007 12:39 PM Re: about a little girl thinking out loud on the process of writing a book

I`d settle for some memories............

 

The Valley Vegan............fraggle <EBbrewpunx wrote:

 

 

i wish we still had our stories peterblast it all................>flower child <zurumato (AT) earthlink (DOT) net>>Jan 7, 2007 8:58 PM> > about a little girl thinking out loud on the process of writing a book>>I think i wanna write a story>>What gets us into trouble is not what we don't know, it's what we know for sure that just ain't so.- Mark Twain

Peter H

 

Send instant messages to your online friends http://uk.messenger.

What gets us into trouble is not what we don't know, it's what we know for sure that just ain't so.

- Mark Twain

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Hi Fraggle

 

> i wish we still had our stories peter

> blast it all................

 

I've still got most of the main plot line and twists in my head. I guess I

should get round to putting it into something other than my head at some

point....

 

BB

Peteer

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Hi Anouk

 

> sometimes I wonder if poetry is in need of revival

> like opera

> the massess shall speak on this.

 

I think the main problem is that most of the " poetry " people are brought up

with nowadays are song lyrics... and (at least in the UK), the sort of songs

that get played to the masses don't tend to contain great poetry....

 

BB

Peter

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It's a poem Peter.

 

Jo

 

 

-

peter VV

Monday, January 08, 2007 6:36 PM

Re: about a little girl thinking out loud on the process of writing a book

 

Hi Anouk,

What on earth are you going on about?, have you been eating the wrong kind of mushrooms?

Seriously though if you did write one, Iwould read it. Maybe Fraggle could offer advice on publishing etc?

 

The Valley Vegan...........flower child <zurumato wrote:

 

 

I think i wanna write a storyits in the beginning stagesI have a plotbut not the details like their agesshould it take place in hollywood?no. I need a setting more greenI know! Pensylvanniaand the year is 1813A grand house. or Poverty? yes. Little money if not any.I see four chairs, no, three that's one too many. Love of course and Heartbreak and yetagain they call each other petand how should it end? and when?a page turner! a cliffhanger? a book with rave reviews I'll be famousI'll be all over the newsnow I must review, rewrite, revealthis manuscript needs a lot of workto make my dream turn real-anouk

Peter H

 

 

 

Try the all-new Mail . "The New Version is radically easier to use" – The Wall Street Journal

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Hi Anouk

 

I enjoyed your poem - it was not lost on me :-)

 

Jo

 

 

, " flower child " <zurumato

wrote:

>

> hi peter,

>

> it is suppose to be a little boy or girl

> thinking out loud on how to write a book

> I was trying to make things rhyme, so it is kinda silly.

>

> and it is published.

> on VEGAN CHAT!!

>

>

> , peter VV <swpgh01@> wrote:

> >

> > Hi Anouk,

> > What on earth are you going on about?, have you been eating the

> wrong kind of mushrooms?

> > Seriously though if you did write one, Iwould read it. Maybe

> Fraggle could offer advice on publishing etc?

> >

> > The Valley Vegan...........

> >

> > flower child <zurumato@> wrote:

> > I think i wanna write a story

> >

> > its in the beginning stages

> > I have a plot

> > but not the details like their ages

> >

> > should it take place in hollywood?

> > no. I need a setting more green

> > I know! Pensylvannia

> > and the year is 1813

> >

> > A grand house. or Poverty?

> > yes. Little money if not any.

> > I see four chairs, no, three

> > that's one too many.

> >

> > Love of course and Heartbreak and yet

> > again they call each other pet

> >

> > and how should it end?

> > and when?

> >

> > a page turner! a cliffhanger?

> > a book with rave reviews

> > I'll be famous

> > I'll be all over the news

> >

> > now I must review, rewrite, reveal

> > this manuscript needs a lot of work

> > to make my dream turn real

> >

> > -anouk

> >

> >

> >

> >

> >

> >

> > Peter H

> >

> >

> >

> >

> > Try the all-new Mail . " The New Version is radically

easier

> to use " – The Wall Street Journal

> >

>

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Sorry, I am tooooo stooooopid sometimes......... The Valley Vegan.............heartwerk <jo.heartwork wrote: Hi AnoukI enjoyed your poem - it was not lost on me :-)Jo , "flower child" <zurumato wrote:>> hi peter, > > it is suppose to be a little boy or girl > thinking out loud on how to write a book> I was

trying to make things rhyme, so it is kinda silly.> > and it is published.> on VEGAN CHAT!!> > > , peter VV <swpgh01@> wrote:> >> > Hi Anouk,> > What on earth are you going on about?, have you been eating the> wrong kind of mushrooms?> > Seriously though if you did write one, Iwould read it. Maybe> Fraggle could offer advice on publishing etc?> > > > The Valley Vegan...........> > > > flower child <zurumato@> wrote:> > I think i wanna write a story> > > > its in the beginning stages> > I have a plot> > but not the details like their ages> > > > should it take place in hollywood?> > no. I need a setting more green> > I know! Pensylvannia>

> and the year is 1813> > > > A grand house. or Poverty? > > yes. Little money if not any.> > I see four chairs, no, three > > that's one too many. > > > > Love of course and Heartbreak and yet> > again they call each other pet> > > > and how should it end? > > and when?> > > > a page turner! a cliffhanger? > > a book with rave reviews > > I'll be famous> > I'll be all over the news> > > > now I must review, rewrite, reveal> > this manuscript needs a lot of work> > to make my dream turn real> > > > -anouk > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Peter H > > > > > > > > > > Try the all-new Mail .

"The New Version is radically easier> to use" – The Wall Street Journal> >>Peter H

 

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