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Moon landing

 

Moon moon, moon...where are you?

You are so special, today you are full

But I can't see you, the clouds are veils

they hide your smile

like they don't care.

 

I'll climb right up to visit you

with Love I'll lift the veil

With a soft cloth I'll wipe them away

or else I'll gently blow

Scatter, scatter, scatter....

I say.

 

There you are, you lovely moon

I feel your silver glow

I closed my eyes took a deep breath

I climbed way up

I landed on your face.

Mmmmmm Kiss

 

 

Katherine you have my permission to post it.

 

 

 

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Hugs and Kisses to the gorgeous Harvest Moon and ALL!!!

 

Love, Angelina

 

 

, Becky Jean Rich

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> Moon landing

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> Moon moon, moon...where are you?

> You are so special, today you are full

> But I can't see you, the clouds are veils

> they hide your smile

> like they don't care.

>

> I'll climb right up to visit you

> with Love I'll lift the veil

> With a soft cloth I'll wipe them away

> or else I'll gently blow

> Scatter, scatter, scatter....

> I say.

>

> There you are, you lovely moon

> I feel your silver glow

> I closed my eyes took a deep breath

> I climbed way up

> I landed on your face.

> Mmmmmm Kiss

>

>

> Katherine you have my permission to post it.

>

>

>

> oneSearch: Finally, mobile search that gives answers, not

web links.

>

>

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I really loved this, and I could feel what you felt and think what you

thought...

as you wrote it. Very descriptive...just love it!

Thanks Becky!

And..hugs and kisses right back, Angelina..and to all!

With love,

Tara

 

 

> Hugs and Kisses to the gorgeous Harvest Moon and

ALL!!!

 

>Love, Angelina

 

, Becky Jean Rich

<beckyjeanrich wrote:

>

>

>

> Moon landing

>

> Moon moon, moon...where are you?

> You are so special, today you are full

> But I can't see you, the clouds are veils

> they hide your smile

> like they don't care.

>

> I'll climb right up to visit you

> with Love I'll lift the veil

> With a soft cloth I'll wipe them away

> or else I'll gently blow

> Scatter, scatter, scatter....

> I say.

>

> There you are, you lovely moon

> I feel your silver glow

> I closed my eyes took a deep breath

> I climbed way up

> I landed on your face.

> Mmmmmm Kiss

>

>

> Katherine you have my permission to post it.

>

>

>

> oneSearch: Finally, mobile search that gives answers, not

web links.

>

>

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It's Claudia the Poetry Moderator, but thanks for the permission to post! Great

poem!

 

Claudia

 

Becky Jean Rich <beckyjeanrich wrote:

 

 

Moon landing

 

Moon moon, moon...where are you?

You are so special, today you are full

But I can't see you, the clouds are veils

they hide your smile

like they don't care.

 

I'll climb right up to visit you

with Love I'll lift the veil

With a soft cloth I'll wipe them away

or else I'll gently blow

Scatter, scatter, scatter....

I say.

 

There you are, you lovely moon

I feel your silver glow

I closed my eyes took a deep breath

I climbed way up

I landed on your face.

Mmmmmm Kiss

 

Katherine you have my permission to post it.

 

 

oneSearch: Finally, mobile search that gives answers, not web links.

 

 

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Great poem Becky,

I love the moon and I always try to will away clouds

so I can see it .

Where I live it's cloudy most days and nights, thick

cloud, and it's rare to see the moon or stars.

I get super excited when I catch a glimpse and I drink

it up.

 

Love Elektra x x x

 

 

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