Guest guest Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Hello group, I have never written any poetry (haha - it will probably be obvious) but wrote this while sitting on the deck yesterday listening to the birds chirp. Their song sounded so other worldly to me. I guess it is Shakti's first verse through Charles. Their words echo things familiar, From far but near – I cannot grasp; The melody falls full yet hollow, A reflection of future and past. These sounds speak in distant tongues, And please me in celestial ways; I comprehend not this splendor, Born of benign but mystical days. Frothing waves in a torrent of time, Crash upon the sea of silence beyond All which my fragile form can sense, Like ripples in a stagnant pond. Much love, Charles Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Very nice! Paul .......... Hello group, I have never written any poetry (haha - it will probably be obvious) but wrote this while sitting on the deck yesterday listening to the birds chirp. Their song sounded so other worldly to me. I guess it is Shakti's first verse through Charles. Their words echo things familiar, From far but near – I cannot grasp; The melody falls full yet hollow, A reflection of future and past. These sounds speak in distant tongues, And please me in celestial ways; I comprehend not this splendor, Born of benign but mystical days. Frothing waves in a torrent of time, Crash upon the sea of silence beyond All which my fragile form can sense, Like ripples in a stagnant pond. Much love, Charles Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 That was nice, thank you for sharing with us Charles : chase: Sun, 20 Jul 2008 19:20:18 +0000Subject: My first K-poem Hello group,I have never written any poetry (haha - it will probably be obvious) but wrote this while sitting on the deck yesterday listening to the birds chirp. Their song sounded so other worldly to me. I guess it is Shakti's first verse through Charles.Their words echo things familiar,From far but near – I cannot grasp;The melody falls full yet hollow,A reflection of future and past.These sounds speak in distant tongues,And please me in celestial ways;I comprehend not this splendor,Born of benign but mystical days.Frothing waves in a torrent of time,Crash upon the sea of silence beyondAll which my fragile form can sense,Like ripples in a stagnant pond.Much love,Charles _______________ Use video conversation to talk face-to-face with . http://www.windowslive.com/messenger/connect_your_way.html?ocid=TXT_TAGLM_WL_Ref\ resh_messenger_video_072008 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Nice Charles! Thank you for posting it. - , " Charles " <chase wrote: > > Hello group, > > I have never written any poetry (haha - it will probably be obvious) > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Late Sri Narayana Guru was a great Yogi. http://www.snaofna.org/ng_b.stm(Sri Narayana Association of north America)He had an awakened Kundalini. He had written about K in a poem called the K song. You can read the translation here : (Scroll down to page 321)http://advaitavedanta.co.uk/content/view/286/--- On Mon, 21/7/08, Charles <chase wrote:Charles <chase My first K-poem Date: Monday, 21 July, 2008, 12:50 AM Hello group, I have never written any poetry (haha - it will probably be obvious) but wrote this while sitting on the deck yesterday listening to the birds chirp. Their song sounded so other worldly to me. I guess it is Shakti's first verse through Charles. Their words echo things familiar, From far but near – I cannot grasp; The melody falls full yet hollow, A reflection of future and past. These sounds speak in distant tongues, And please me in celestial ways; I comprehend not this splendor, Born of benign but mystical days. Frothing waves in a torrent of time, Crash upon the sea of silence beyond All which my fragile form can sense, Like ripples in a stagnant pond. Much love, Charles From Chandigarh to Chennai - find friends all over India. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Lovely Charles - thank you for sharing , " Charles " <chase wrote: > > Hello group, > > I have never written any poetry (haha - it will probably be obvious) > but wrote this while sitting on the deck yesterday listening to the > birds chirp. Their song sounded so other worldly to me. I guess it > is Shakti's first verse through Charles. > > Their words echo things familiar, > From far but near – I cannot grasp; > The melody falls full yet hollow, > A reflection of future and past. > > These sounds speak in distant tongues, > And please me in celestial ways; > I comprehend not this splendor, > Born of benign but mystical days. > > Frothing waves in a torrent of time, > Crash upon the sea of silence beyond > All which my fragile form can sense, > Like ripples in a stagnant pond. > > Much love, > Charles > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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