Guest guest Posted August 21, 2008 Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 Hello Beloveds, I've been feeling led to write some Kundalini Haikus, and as I launch out on this I thought I'd invite anyone else along that would like to express in this way. For those who would like more information about them, I found this: " Haiku is a poetic form and a type of poetry from the Japanese culture. Haiku combines form, content, and language in a meaningful, yet compact form. Haiku poets, which you will soon be, write about everyday things. Many themes include nature, feelings, or experiences. Usually they use simple words and grammar. The most common form for Haiku is three short lines. The first line usually contains five (5) syllables, the second line seven (7) syllables, and the third line contains five (5) syllables. Haiku doesn't rhyme. A Haiku must " paint " a mental image in the reader's mind. This is the challenge of Haiku - to put the poem's meaning and imagery in the reader's mind in ONLY 17 syllables over just three (3) lines of poetry. " This is my first one: Mother Gently She touches Places of anger and pain Releasing my heart Love, dhyana Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 I love Haiku, let me try: Dancing across life making everything shimmer in shades of heaven . Send instant messages to your online friends http://uk.messenger. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Hello Dhyana and All, I couldn't resist to this one Please tell me if my english is correct : Under summer rain Caterpillars get ready, Tender breeze embrace. Love from Paris, Minia. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 I have one too, hehe! Bursting out with song Ripples of delight abound Morning's light spring forth Love, Linda , " miniadangvu77 " <miniadangvu wrote: > > Hello Dhyana and All, > I couldn't resist to this one > Please tell me if my english is correct : > > > Under summer rain > Caterpillars get ready, > Tender breeze embrace. > > > Love from Paris, > > Minia. > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Yes, it is good English Minia, and quite tasty too! Peter , " miniadangvu77 " <miniadangvu wrote: > > Hello Dhyana and All, > I couldn't resist to this one > Please tell me if my english is correct : > > > Under summer rain > Caterpillars get ready, > Tender breeze embrace. > > > Love from Paris, > > Minia. > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Forgetting to be, alive, open eyes and breathe! Lightning Shakti Comes! , " novalees " <dhyana wrote: > > Hello Beloveds, > > I've been feeling led to write some Kundalini Haikus, and as I launch > out on this I thought I'd invite anyone else along that would like > to express in this way. > > For those who would like more information about them, I found this: > > " Haiku is a poetic form and a type of poetry from > the Japanese culture. Haiku combines form, content, > and language in a meaningful, yet compact form. > > Haiku poets, which you will soon be, write about > everyday things. Many themes include nature, feelings, > or experiences. Usually they use simple words and > grammar. The most common form for Haiku is three short > lines. The first line usually contains five (5) syllables, > the second line seven (7) syllables, and the third line > contains five (5) syllables. Haiku doesn't rhyme. > > A Haiku must " paint " a mental image in the reader's mind. > This is the challenge of Haiku - to put the poem's meaning > and imagery in the reader's mind in ONLY 17 syllables over > just three (3) lines of poetry. " > > > This is my first one: > > Mother > > Gently She touches > Places of anger and pain > Releasing my heart > > Love, > dhyana > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 With your kind permission let me add another three lines : Slipping on the floor Head hits a wall Blood flows non-stop !!RegardsVG--- On Fri, 22/8/08, Elektra Fire <elektra.fire wrote:Elektra Fire <elektra.fireSubject: Re: Kundalini Haiku Date: Friday, 22 August, 2008, 2:09 PM I love Haiku, let me try: Dancing across life making everything shimmer in shades of heaven . Send instant messages to your online friends http://uk.messenger . Unlimited freedom, unlimited storage. Get it now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 As I Am I Shall Be I Awake Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 As you areSleep wellAnd dream--- On Sat, 23/8/08, Chris_H <chghes1 wrote:Chris_H <chghes1 Re: Kundalini Haiku Date: Saturday, 23 August, 2008, 10:12 AM As I Am I Shall Be I Awake Unlimited freedom, unlimited storage. Get it now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Wow, these are deceptively difficult! Look behind my eyes. Love is my open secret, flowing from heaven. Tom , " novalees " <dhyana wrote: > > Haiku is a poetic form and a type of poetry from > the Japanese culture. Haiku combines form, content, > and language in a meaningful, yet compact form. > > Haiku poets, which you will soon be, write about > everyday things. Many themes include nature, feelings, > or experiences. Usually they use simple words and > grammar. The most common form for Haiku is three short > lines. The first line usually contains five (5) syllables, > the second line seven (7) syllables, and the third line > contains five (5) syllables. Haiku doesn't rhyme. > > A Haiku must " paint " a mental image in the reader's mind. > This is the challenge of Haiku - to put the poem's meaning > and imagery in the reader's mind in ONLY 17 syllables over > just three (3) lines of poetry. " Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 I have three this morning. Shakti's lips all blue Opens wide her fangs revealed Serpentine devours Blue triangle, peace Love and joy, beauty and grace Two as one,Divine Splashes of colors Spinning chakras,humming ears, Kundalini plays Love, Linda , " etomireland " <singaporenoodles wrote: > > Wow, these are deceptively difficult! > > Look behind my eyes. > Love is my open secret, > flowing from heaven. > Tom > > , " novalees " > <dhyana@> wrote: > > > > Haiku is a poetic form and a type of poetry from > > the Japanese culture. Haiku combines form, content, > > and language in a meaningful, yet compact form. > > > > Haiku poets, which you will soon be, write about > > everyday things. Many themes include nature, feelings, > > or experiences. Usually they use simple words and > > grammar. The most common form for Haiku is three short > > lines. The first line usually contains five (5) syllables, > > the second line seven (7) syllables, and the third line > > contains five (5) syllables. Haiku doesn't rhyme. > > > > A Haiku must " paint " a mental image in the reader's mind. > > This is the challenge of Haiku - to put the poem's meaning > > and imagery in the reader's mind in ONLY 17 syllables over > > just three (3) lines of poetry. " > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Blue eyes open, stirs Spinning webs, buzzing of bees Fragrant life arrives Shattered glass,chaos Evolving death rebirthing, Life goes on and on Delusive egos, Big I, little i, mingle Weaving webs grandeur Heart chakra spinning, Love,joy, peace expanding Earth gladly recieves Graditude and worship Gladly bow down,surrender Shakti's red lips smiles When it rains, it pours Creative juices moving Rise up, overflowing Sorry, too many Haikus rise up unbidden, Release thoughts, feelings Linda nbiddingKundalini-Awakening-Systems- 1 , " novalees " > > <dhyana@> wrote: > > > > > > Haiku is a poetic form and a type of poetry from > > > the Japanese culture. Haiku combines form, content, > > > and language in a meaningful, yet compact form. > > > > > > Haiku poets, which you will soon be, write about > > > everyday things. Many themes include nature, feelings, > > > or experiences. Usually they use simple words and > > > grammar. The most common form for Haiku is three short > > > lines. The first line usually contains five (5) syllables, > > > the second line seven (7) syllables, and the third line > > > contains five (5) syllables. Haiku doesn't rhyme. > > > > > > A Haiku must " paint " a mental image in the reader's mind. > > > This is the challenge of Haiku - to put the poem's meaning > > > and imagery in the reader's mind in ONLY 17 syllables over > > > just three (3) lines of poetry. " > > > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 DNA and RNAIntertwined like snakesIn a friendly wayGives raise to life And all its emotionsLove and hate includedAnd all desiresAnd urgesAnd longingsSpinning a web of MayaImprisons usHelpless humans !! Add more friends to your messenger and enjoy! Invite them now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Lol! You're on a roll! Don't stop now! Loving it, dhyana , " Linda " <crazycats711 wrote: > > Sorry, too many > Haikus rise up unbidden, > Release thoughts, feelings > > > Linda > > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 I am finding this a lot of fun Dhyana. I even tried to do one in my prayer language last night, but couldn't get it to work out. LOL! Here's a few more. Chrism teacher guide, With wisdom and love,sharing Shaktipat blessings Full moon glowing bright, Feminine cycles obey Goddesses create Mother nature gives, Colors, sounds, sweet cool breezes Charming our senses Manifest jewels, Treasures in Heaven,storing Gifting love, sharing Mother Goddess, Gaia Creator's love reflecting Shekinah Glory Christ Messiah Lord Buddha, Kishna, Shiva, all Create completion Glory be, Dhyana Even while dreaming, haikus Are in the making Love Linda , " novalees " <dhyana wrote: > > Lol! You're on a roll! Don't stop now! > > Loving it, > dhyana > > , " Linda " > <crazycats711@> wrote: > > > > > Sorry, too many > > Haikus rise up unbidden, > > Release thoughts, feelings > > > > > > Linda > > > > > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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