Guest guest Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Thats lovely Chris but Haiku has 5 syllabuls in the first line, 7 in the second line and 5 in the last. Not that there is anything wrong with your beautiful sentiment :-)) love elektra x x x --- On Sat, 23/8/08, Chris_H <chghes1 wrote: > Chris_H <chghes1 > As I Am > I Shall Be > I Awake Send instant messages to your online friends http://uk.messenger. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 If one is fussy About the number of Letters in each lineOne can callThis haikuas Hi-jaku !!RegardsVG--- On Sat, 23/8/08, Elektra Fire <elektra.fire wrote:Elektra Fire <elektra.fire Re: Kundalini Haiku Chris and everybody Date: Saturday, 23 August, 2008, 4:03 PM Thats lovely Chris but Haiku has 5 syllabuls in the first line, 7 in the second line and 5 in the last. Not that there is anything wrong with your beautiful sentiment :-)) love elektra x x x --- On Sat, 23/8/08, Chris_H <chghes1 (AT) hotmail (DOT) com> wrote: > Chris_H <chghes1 (AT) hotmail (DOT) com> > As I Am > I Shall Be > I Awake Send instant messages to your online friends http://uk.messenger . Did you know? You can CHAT without downloading messenger. Click here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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