Guest guest Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 Hi All: Here is a spontaneous writing...thought I would share, fwiw. Interesting none-the-less to experience on my end. I know not of what you speak Yet I lay here at your feet Not so-forbidden fruit to eat Watermelon wishes and caviar dreams Go on, fish from the polluted stream Of ego unconscious But I am I cried, I am said I Neil Diamond in the rough Stones tumbled into shiny gems I cashed in my Violent Femmes tape, Two cents of my $5 soul Collection gathering dust Don't sweep it under the rug To be discovered by the next home buyer Beware of the dog With a bark worse than its bite For truth lays hidden out of sight Smell, taste, are not all the senses Remember to Listen And keep your mouth shut The door and open the windows wide To the breeze and swim inside the stream of a collective consciousness Hmmm... Love: Danielle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 Hey Danielle, That is some pretty cool/hip spontaneous writing! Jennifer , " iamwaitingmoon " <iamwaitingmoon wrote: > > Hi All: > Here is a spontaneous writing...thought I would share, fwiw. Interesting none-the-less to experience on my end. > > > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 Very cool - you seem to have tapped into the beat poet dimensions. I like it! Love, David , " iamwaitingmoon " <iamwaitingmoon wrote: > > Hi All: > Here is a spontaneous writing...thought I would share, fwiw. Interesting none-the-less to experience on my end. > > > I know not of what you speak > Yet I lay here at your feet > Not so-forbidden fruit to eat > Watermelon wishes and caviar dreams > Go on, fish from the polluted stream > Of ego unconscious > But I am I cried, I am said I > Neil Diamond in the rough > Stones tumbled into shiny gems > I cashed in my Violent Femmes > tape, Two cents of my $5 soul > Collection gathering dust > Don't sweep it under the rug > To be discovered by the next home buyer > Beware of the dog > With a bark worse than its bite > For truth lays hidden out of sight > Smell, taste, are not all the senses > Remember to Listen > And keep your mouth shut > The door and open the windows wide > To the breeze and swim inside > the stream of a collective consciousness > > > Hmmm... > Love: > Danielle > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Hmmmm...i wonder what syllabic music would from your lips come forth if for one minute you'd think about it!! Hardnut. Hmmm... Love: Danielle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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