Guest guest Posted June 18, 2003 Report Share Posted June 18, 2003 just a little poem i thought of while i was depressed, feedback and discusion apreciated /images/graemlins/smile.gif if i was a star, a star up above if i could shine lite into your eye would u look at me and wonder why or loose me in the nite sky when i thought of this it was so obvious to me the emotions i was trying to express, and i wrote this without even being aware of what i was feeling (heartbreak). strange how the subconscious can infiltrate our conscioness in music and poem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 18, 2003 Report Share Posted June 18, 2003 ummm i think maybe you need a cup of herbal tea /images/graemlins/wink.gif Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gHari Posted June 18, 2003 Report Share Posted June 18, 2003 I liked the poem. I think I understand the feeling: unrequited love. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theist Posted June 18, 2003 Report Share Posted June 18, 2003 I liked it too. Made me think of my insignificance. Also some thoughts came about the relativity of our position in relation to others. A star seen from a great distance seems so tiny, but yet it is the life sustainer for those more directly within its sphere of influence. Any unlimited number of jivas. My God!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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